Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
When was the last time u visited your grandfather's house? What about your other far relatives? Many people in the today society can't answer these simple questions. But why? does our society put the same value to the family as before? I believe the extended family losing its value and I'm going to explain why in this essay.
With the industrialization, jobs become more and more demanding both physically and mentally and as result, people have less free time to spend on family meetings. Many of today teenager can only see their grandparents on holidays. I was one of these teenagers and to be honest many of my relatives are a bunch of total strangers that I have to see, like once in a year. In my view, this limited interaction is one of the reasons that led to the decline in extended family value.
Furthermore, many people today tend to live in a far distance from their relatives for reasons like job opportunity, cost of living, better quality of life and..., For example, when I was eight years old, we had to move to capital because of my father's job. In my view, this long distance adds up to this problem as the old adage says out of the sight out of the mind.
Another reason that deserves some words is social media. With this rapid growth of social media now we can interact and have more relation than ever before. These wider options make it possible for us to spend time with people we like and have the same interest rather than the limited family members. For instance, i prefer to spend my time with my online friends rather than my boring cousins.
Because of the made reasons l believe that the extended family is become less and less valuable and will likely continue to lose its place as our society construction evolve.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, for example, for instance, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5873015873 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40919545204 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546031746032 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3216828043 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3125 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6875 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9375 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162068764602 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515090664537 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346399277334 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0937267233644 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370573503222 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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