Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The most important thing the government should do to improve health care is to clean the environment.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
To live happy and healthy are the most people care about. Some people are saying that the most important thing that should governments do is clean the environment to improve health care. However, I do not agree with that statement.
Granted, cleaning the environment will improve health care somehow. Like 1800s London had the worst sanitary, sewage flow all over the streets, no one cleaning the garbage. Disease bred from that unclean circumstance. Moreover, people do not know it is the reason that causes most of the illness. Nowadays London is very clean, and no disease from streets garbages or sewage flow thanks to the effort of the government to clean the environment. Also, this circumstance occurred many years ago, today's city have already cleaned the basic environment, and most of the disease are not coming from the city environment.
So, funding medical research should improve health care. We are facing various disease caused by unknown reason. For example, my country China had very bad contagious flue called SARS in 2008. At first, we do not know why this happens, the government put everything they can to study the SARS, and find out that the bird virus is the contagious source. Knowing how that virus is spreading make the government do the right action. Segregating the ill people and preventing healthy people from public transportations, and new medicine for illness people. We finally defeat the terrible virus.
Furthermore, putting money into health welfare is very important to improve health care for every people. If one people get sick, he needs to go to the hospital and take medicine. Moreover, sometimes the medical fee is very high and preventing people go to the hospital because they are scared to confirm that they are ill, which may cause further illness. However, if the government can provide the part of the hospital fee, people might have willing to check their body in regular interval, which can detect their illness before it deteriorates. So, the government should improve health care welfare that let everyone can have medical care with reasonable fee.
In conclusion, cleaning the environments have some effect on health care, but for todays cities, funding medical research and putting money into health welfare are more important to improve health care. Therefore, I think it is unjustified to say cleaning the environments is the most important move to improve health care.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2046.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14070351759 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58832509205 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.2039849616 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9565217391 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3043478261 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13043478261 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326846460113 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107730652894 0.076458572812 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105837725053 0.0737576698707 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218411838473 0.150856017488 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113529443808 0.0645574589148 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.