Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
To improve the quality of education, universities should spend money on salaries university professors.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Professors of a university are the core of the educational system because they are the main source of the information that students learn from. Some people think that if the salary of the professors increases, the quality of education rises a lot. Personally, I do agree that tutors should obtain more money for few reasons which I will elaborate on.
First, tutors will concentrate on their teaching more. Certainly, they are human and they need money to continue living, and if they know that the university is going to be a good source of money, they will put more effort to satisfy the university's needs for better education. For example, we used to have a teacher at school that had more than four children, and the salary from teaching was not enough for him, so he had to work out of school too. Sometimes he got to class late because he was busy with the other job. In addition to that he made a lot of phone calls in the time of the class. That is why we did not learn much that year.
Second, tutors of the university are going to spend more time if the university pays them well. If the professors stay more in their class, students can meet and see them more times to ask them question regarding the content of the classes or research projects. For instance, I had a friend in our university who was doing a very important research on cancer, so he needed some expert to always help him in doing laboratory works. His tutor accepted to help him in his project, as the result they spent more than three hours in the laboratory each day together.
Finally, professors deserve to receive a good amount of salary. To be honest, teachers build the future of our nation, and if the university and professors understand their important role in the current world, both side pay more attention to the education. university does not consider paying more money to the tutors is useless, beside that teachers do their own job better even if they do not receive enough money.
Basically, professors should earn good salary because they train the future leaders of our nation, and they can spend more time training these leaders and concentrate better on their job
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'very important research'.
Suggestion: very important research
... friend in our university who was doing a very important research on cancer, so he needed some expert to ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: University
...de pay more attention to the education. university does not consider paying more money to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, regarding, second, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1790.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 385.0 407.700716846 94% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64935064935 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44618792929 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493506493506 0.524837075471 94% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.998335157 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.294117647 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6470588235 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11764705882 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163992801483 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557004866975 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554475957604 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103326876441 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366309147123 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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