Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
To remain happy and optimistic when you fail is more important than achieving success.
The issue at hand is what is you reaction when you fail, is important for you to remain happy and optimistic than achieving success when you fail.
The issue is important because human always confront problem and your reaction is important on life.
I believe that remain happy and optimistic when you fail is the better option because human will get discouragement and hopeless for trying to get his goal and new innovation don't get for solving problem.
In my point of view, Remain happy and optimistic when you fail is preferable because if human get discouragement and hopeless for trying to get his goal, his effort will stop to get his goal.
Finally, I think remain happy and optimistic when you fail is the right choice because if human doesn't remain happy and optimistic, he will not get any effort to reach his goal then new innovation will not get for solving problem.
Ultimately, I feel that remain happy and optimistic when you fail is the correct one.
I believe this because hopeless and discouragement will get human to stop for getting the goal and world will not see any new innovation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'innovation'.
Suggestion: innovation
...hopeless for trying to get his goal and new innovation dont get for solving problem. In my po...
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Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ying to get his goal and new innovation dont get for solving problem. In my point o...
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Line 5, column 97, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...il is the right choice because if human doesnt remain happy and optimistic, he will no...
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Line 5, column 183, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'innovation'.
Suggestion: innovation
...t get any effort to reach his goal then new innovation will not get for solving problem. Ulti...
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Line 7, column 123, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'innovation'.
Suggestion: innovation
...ing the goal and world will not see any new innovation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, then, i feel, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 52.1666666667 19% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 1977.66487455 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 193.0 407.700716846 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77202072539 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 4.48103885553 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56376701085 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 212.727598566 37% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.40414507772 0.524837075471 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 278.1 618.680645161 45% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.2036668309 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.571428571 100.406767564 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5714285714 20.6045352989 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313615986397 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.210059386317 0.076458572812 275% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.173289233126 0.0737576698707 235% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210059386317 0.150856017488 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.173289233126 0.0645574589148 268% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 58.1214874552 105% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.53 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 86.8835125448 22% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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