Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To remain happy and optimistic when you fail is more important than achieving success.
By and large, it is established beyond doubt that life is full of trials and tribulations and these difficulties can be sweet or painful as well, which accompany us in the whole life. Indeed, vast majorities of people bend over backward and make efforts to become successful but every mature human being has to admit that the success will be a blank dream without difficulties. Various point of view which are germane to the matter being discussed brings us to the moot question as to whether people should stay happy and lively even after failure. However, the popular sentiment to which I vehemently cling is that if people still want to make a progress day in day out, they have to try to keep their motivation alive. The underlying aim of this essay is to put forward some cogent reasons to shed light on a number of issues in this framework.
To commence with, there is no doubt that that life is full of failures, achievements, obstacles, barriers, happiness, and sadness and so forth. So, people have an inevitable tendency to confront with these conditions and in some case, it might not be their decisions to opt for happiness and sadness. Generally phrased, people should always try to be happy and lively in order to improve their motivation and incentive even after the failure. As a palpable example, the failure is like a bridge to success. Not only can the failure help people improve their motivation but also can help them to keep track of their goals incisively and reach a conspicuous success in their personal lives. To elucidate more on this issue, if people want to be successful and make a progress regularly in the long run, they should experience different situations including happiness and sadness.
Another equally salient point in corroborating my stance in this subject is that remain motivated after the failure is so helpful and informative. If we take a minute to ponder over it, people should make their efforts so as to learn various things from their failure owing to the fact that these failures provide fertile ground for people to build up their future lives. It can be deduced from a combination of breadth of coverage and depth of detail that if people lose their motivation and incentive because of failure, hardly can they achieve an impressive success which would guarantee their lives.
However, every coin has two sides. Maybe stay happy even after failure does not work properly. In fact, people should learn how to do their tasks precisely and meticulously and even if something disruptive comes up, they should be able to take the responsibility for their work. So, in this way, not only can they reach a noticeable success but also can remain happy and thrill. Nevertheless, it was a story in a nutshell; actually, there are more reasonable grounds that can lend weight to my personal perspective.
In light of reasons elaborated, I reiterate that
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, well, as to, in fact, no doubt, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2417.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 495.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88282828283 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71684168287 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64549600594 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494949494949 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 756.0 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6013489045 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.85 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0799000161513 0.236089414692 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0294200679909 0.076458572812 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0258512766968 0.0737576698707 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0458782376498 0.150856017488 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326596661623 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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