do you agree or disagree with this sentence?to remain happy and optimistic when you fail is more important than achieving success.
There are some moot points about the most important thing in our life. The question of whether success is the most important thing or not has aroused as a subject of controversy among people. some people assert that the most significant thing is being happy and optimistic when we fail. Everyone has their own zeitgeist. When it comes to my position, I strongly subscribe to the point that being happy and optimist during the fails is very considerable. I have some reasons, two of which will be explicated hereunder.
The first reason worth discussing here is that the failure is the first step of the win. We can use our fault to reach prosperity. There is a famous proverb in the Persian language, which fails are the basis of the success to be more specific, failures increase our experiences and prevent us from another fails, therefore, each defeat ameliorates our sign to the matters and boost our prosperity. As a case to the point, I vividly remember, when I was a student, we had a competition in mathematics calculation among whole students of the school. In the first competition, I lost due to lacking experience but finally, I gained worth things from my fault and worked in my foible consequently, I wined at last. My personal experience competently corroborates this idea that failure is the basis of success and everyone should be happy and optimist during their failure.
By the same token, another paramount reason to be mentioned is that the dolorous and pessimistic manner have a negative impact on our lives. If someone being a pessimist about something, this action will lead to failure. Hence, being optimist and happiness make the positive aspect of the matter and give rise to the following success. My personal example demonstrates this reality. Two days ago I watched a program on the BBC channel, which claims that an optimist person is more successful that pessimist person. In that program, some psychologist content that optimistic view lead to positive energy around our duty and owing to this positive energy the percentage of prosperity soar dramatically. I think about that argument and realize that sometimes, I confront with this assertion and probably it is true. My own example shed some light of the idea that being an optimist is a very important thing in our life.
To wrap it up, according to the aforementioned reasons, happiness and optimist manner is the most important thing in our life. These actions not only lead to fortify our experience but also make positive energy around our life. I strictly recommend to individuals to try these activities more and more in their life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 72, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: Whether; The question whether
...t the most important thing in our life. The question of whether success is the most important thing or ...
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Line 1, column 193, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
... a subject of controversy among people. some people assert that the most significant...
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Line 3, column 152, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...egative impact on our lives. If someone being a pessimist about something, this actio...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, hence, if, so, therefore, i think, it is true, by the same token
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2187.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 444.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92567567568 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77667811607 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481981981982 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 696.6 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.815504533 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0869565217 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3043478261 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5652173913 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171674129843 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543201395159 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466300486879 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112321733131 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029439015087 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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