Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
At the turn of the new century, with the development of humans modern society, more and more people tend to explore new things specifically young people worldwide, Actually, people's attitudes towards this issue are varied from person to person. Although many would argue that the older people are the most important factor in nation building, In my opinion, the young people have a far greater impact to the society but there are several obstacles now toward them. I would suggest tow reasons based on my general facts in addition to my personal experiences to support the argument.
The first aspect to point out is that no one can cast a shadow of doubt on the fact that in today's sophisticated world we live in, the young people are the most important things of our society. the efficiency of society is measured by the degree and the quality of its young people. This does not negate the role of adults in society. on the contrary, I want to mention the quote I have read in a book before " many benefits quickly stem from our parents". I still affirm the same idea because is no guarantee that the young people don't spend a lot of time to support their social and helps their culture to improvement. A vivid example can be given to shed light on what has elaborated above. take an example for a young people graduate from his university and needs to find a good job to achieve his goals. admittedly, he spends a plethora of time to search more and more to find a job and then if it is found a job he will spend several hours at work without feeling the time around him because of a lot of pressure at work.
On the other hand, in my opinion, it is widely understood, that young people today serve their communities in brilliant ways, not in traditional ways. The rapid development of technology today gives people many chances to help their communities in many ways. For instance, the television channels, the websites and many others way.
this is due to the fact that, Nowadays, the world became faster than before. These days do not resemble the days of my ancestors.
As you can see, based on the argument above, I strongly believe that people today have a wide range of knowledge that makes them able to serve the community in different ways. Eventually, the youth today consider the backbone of the country. On the other hand, people in the past have a limited range of knowledge and that confined their role
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, so, still, then, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2006.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 434.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62211981567 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48451211342 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52534562212 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 638.1 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 10.0 3.08781362007 324% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8253907152 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.578947368 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8421052632 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26315789474 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193665629532 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514971191333 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448715215498 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0911507130457 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315499635399 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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