Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
From the time immemorial from the history of the human, the revolution made possible only through the active engagement of the younger blood. communities may drive through the vision from the season person but the enthusiasm of younger one is always paramount in the development. however, I believe that younger people may have estrange from the community service today because less feeling for community health and heavy enticement in with sophisticated means and luxury.
To begin with, younger people grown up by indulging with luxury and less cares about the nation. only selfinterest is the prevalent cognition can found in mindset of most of the young people. they live most of the live in solitude from the society duty and indulgence in the luxury like going disco, riding,travelling, gaming,etc. In contemporary situation, to expect younger people for community service is too high;they are in the situation where they even give a glance about what is happening to the society. So expectation from younger people for helping community is being very rare.
Furthermore, most of the young people lives in the life of the fantasy due to advanced media. Actor and actress are the prime most influencers for their lives. As movies and pop star mostly depicts the unrealistic attitude they focus on coping this nonsense character. Consequently, they lives in the non realistic world and rarely have thought in the community building process. For instance, when I was in college, my friends and I had hardly take part in the community program. we focused mainly in the moment of enjoyment and imitation from the film star. In one incident, we had evaded the community cleaning program for watching movie. Clearly, the scenario shows the growing distress of the younger people in the aspect of the community.
Finally, lacking encouragement in younger people to think about the community is major issue for their no involvement in the community. On the past, the scenario was different, people were often taught about the principle why and how should develop our nation; and particularly their role in the community. however, todays people are busy and negligent, they hardly care about this aspects.
In conclusion, younger people need to take part in community program for the betterment of the society. The negative factors may keep away youth to join these program. however, by providing awareness to realize their duty, it can be solved to some extent.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Communities
...active engagement of the younger blood. communities may drive through the vision from the s...
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Suggestion: However
...is always paramount in the development. however, I believe that younger people may have...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'estranged'.
Suggestion: estranged
... I believe that younger people may have estrange from the community service today becaus...
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun cares is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...e grown up by indulging with luxury and less cares about the nation. only selfintere...
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Suggestion: Only
...luxury and less cares about the nation. only selfinterest is the prevalent cognitio...
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: They
...in mindset of most of the young people. they live most of the live in solitude from ...
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Suggestion: , travelling
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Suggestion: , etc
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'live'
Suggestion: live
... nonsense character. Consequently, they lives in the non realistic world and rarely h...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
...in college, my friends and I had hardly take part in the community program. we focus...
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Suggestion: We
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Suggestion: However
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Suggestion: However
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, furthermore, however, if, may, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2087.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 401.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20448877805 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73747998721 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54114713217 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 651.6 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6084074017 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8636363636 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2272727273 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04545454545 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0853781936198 0.236089414692 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0283222161113 0.076458572812 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0252770602387 0.0737576698707 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0517742453712 0.150856017488 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197607508653 0.0645574589148 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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