Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
nowadays, differences between pervious generations and currently generations are very obvious so that, these differences results in weak relationships between these two generations, but, there are still a lot of people among the newer generation who help and support the people involved in the previous generations. I have several reasons in order to prove my statement, some of which are elaborated in the following:
As the most persusive reasons, even thought some of the young people seems as busy as others think that they have no time to the their communities, actually, some of them are working in a project, research, or job that its main goal is improvement in the lives quality in the community. Consider a student who works on a project, with the aim of improve the quality of water that is used by the people, therefor, although this student does not help to the community directly, he or she will make a sufficient improvement in the quality of peoples' lives.
Second, in the come countries taxes which young pepole are supposed to pay, will alloted to the poeple in the their comminity such as olders and incapacities. in this countries if young people population decrease, the taxes and consequently the helps to the people in the communities would decrease. as a result, taxes as a assist to the people in the community would be obviously a wonderfull issue.
as another reason, there are a huge number of jobs duable mostly by young peoples that primarily their responsibiltie is helping to the community such as nursing, medicine jobs, police and such works. as an example, a doctor who treats the patient is helping to the his or her community in the whole of day, even whole of his or her life. so, we should not disregard this noticable responsibilties in some of the jobs and consirable their assist to the their community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, consequently, if, second, so, still, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88888888889 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85967436352 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.1344086022 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.4032806678 48.9658058833 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.111111111 100.406767564 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.0 20.6045352989 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166898684639 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669914107951 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329851625597 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0949954452874 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00734854798143 0.0645574589148 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 11.7677419355 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 58.1214874552 62% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 10.1575268817 166% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 10.002688172 305% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.0537634409 159% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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