Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people enjoy life more than older people do.
life is the most precious opportunity that we have and it never happen again. Through history always people do everything to have more pleasure in their lives and there is a controversry question that whether youth enjoy the life or elder one. some people believe that young people enjoy more because they have much more energy and incentive for having fun in their lives. However, I am against this idea, believeing older ones enjogy more. The ensuing pragraphs explain my reasons for this position.
First and foremost, younger ones always experience a lot of pressure and stress, for instance they worry about gaining a decent job, passing their university exams, finding a perfect wife or husbands and an assortments of these stresses, so they enjoy life less than older ones. put it in other words, due to the compact and sophisticated world that we live in, the competition between young individuals to have a prosperous life is high thus, they should put vigorous attempt to pass every stage of their lives. In this way they will have more experience than elder people who pass all these stages in many years ago and have a sustain life. On example can drive this notion home. As I remember, when I was child, I was worry about my school's scores, when I was juvenil, I felt a lot of stress about how accept in a prestigeous university, when I became young, I experience lots of anxiouty to how find a decent job and pay for my living. Hence, I never enjoy my life in that period.
Second, older ones experience ups and downs of the life, so they were learnt through the time and they realized that the life is shorter than they thought so it is better that enjoy every moment of their life. Therefore, they try to spend their time with people that they love, for instance, their children and also do whatever they want for example, use their money instead deposit it for unpredictable future. On the other hand, young people think that they have a lot of time to live and some times they lose the best moments of their lives in a way that they cannot enjoy life.
In conclusion, although have a enjoyable and exiciting life is the goal of everyone, some people enjoy more than other ones. In my opinion, older and experienced people enjoy more than juvenile and young bcause they pass the difficult stage of life and also they realize the value of each moment of their lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1980.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 424.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66981132075 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3444867271 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483490566038 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 627.3 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.3660708926 48.9658058833 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.75 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 5.45110844103 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269380629377 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108457589194 0.076458572812 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800864553595 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211142972557 0.150856017488 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727507451294 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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