Young people enjoy life more than older people do.
Enjoyment of life, in its holistic sense, has more to do with passion and satiation rather than the age of an individual. Considering the time, money, responsibilities and experience one has, I aver that elderly are more likely to enjoy their life than the young people. Young people are puffed with career stress, are verdant and have more to amass than spend. In contrast, the old people have less responsibilities, are seasoned and have more to spend than save. This traits of elderly afford them to revel their life; freely devoid of contrition.
Old people have more time to pursue their desires than the young people. Unlike adults, elderly are mostly retired, and have plentiful time to enjoy their life. Some use the time to travel to places, some join the elderly clubs while the others tell anecdotes and write autobiography. They are free of deadlines, career achievements and the family responsibilities: they have their sons/daughters (the young people) to manage the family.
Old people are seasoned with the experiences of their life; they are rife with the abilities to foresee the problems and prevent them beforehand. In addition, they are taken care by other members of the family. They are lauded and revered for their struggle in their young age. In fact, they are considered as the adviser of family, whose guidelines are followed by every member. What does this status provide other than deep satisfaction and enjoyment to the elderly? while some might claim their deteriorating health as shortcoming, in fact, it is their asset; as the old people are more conscious about their drinking and eating, in addition to the abundant time for exercise, they have more chances to stay fit than the depressed and slovenly youths.
Old people, mostly retired, have their retirement plan to support their financial needs. Some use the saving to travel around the world while the others engage in the philanthropy. Most of the elderly are never sort of money to follow their will. In contrast, the young people always have financial throes. They have yet to settle their family, amass property and manage material needs. The elderly, having completed the age of material accumulation, chase their instinct and achieve self-actualization.
Considering every traits of blissful life, elderly are more likely to possess them than the young people. Those who are free of responsibilities and have sufficient resources are more likely to rejoice their life than the struggling ones. Therefore, the above examples and reasoning buttress the idea that old people can enjoy their life to greater extent than the young people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, while, in addition, in contrast, in fact, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2209.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 430.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13720930233 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72691054186 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.460465116279 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 701.1 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.9599576624 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0416666667 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9166666667 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.04166666667 5.45110844103 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337053939275 0.236089414692 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117272829375 0.076458572812 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106573561279 0.0737576698707 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248674700047 0.150856017488 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133147088934 0.0645574589148 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.