Do you agree or disagree
It is better to live in one place all your life than to move from one place to another
It goes without any doubt that the people's attitude toward the lifestyle is completely various. Many people like to live in different places and believe this kind of life is enjoyable, while others are inclined to live in one city for whole their life. In my perspective, I agree with the latter idea for a couple of reasons which will be explined in the following paragraphs.
The first and foremost reason coming to my mind is that, living in one city provides an opportunity for people to keep in touch with old friends for a long time, so they can save their time and energy. To be more specific, there is no doubt that when people move to another city for living, they have to make new friends and it would take lots of time and energy. Therefore, when people choose to live in one place forever, they can mailtain their close and old friensds and it is not hidden to anyone that old friends cannot be replaced with new friends. To illustrate my point in this way, when I was fifteen years old, my family had to immigrate to another country because of my father's work. It was extremely hard for me to make new friendships. In fact, it took a long time to find new friends who felt as convinient and comfortable as I had with old friends.
The second reason worthy of note is that, people who live in a one place are more likely to promote in their job and life. What is more, individuals who move from one place to other place, they have to constantly adapte themselves to the new workplace, after a while that they get acquented with workplace' atmosphere and ther are ready to make progress, they have to go to another place to live. Eventually, they are deprived of the chance of career advancment. For instance, my father did not like to stay at one place, so he always changed the life's place. Although my father was talent in his job, he workes as a software engineer in different companies, he never could flourish because whenever he wanted to present his ability and experties, he moved other coty for living.
To recap, I believe that people who live in one place can take more beneficial as I mentioned above, not only they can save their time and energy, but also they have more chance to get promotion in their work.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 36, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
It goes without any doubt that the peoples attitude toward the lifestyle is comple...
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Line 2, column 240, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... To be more specific, there is no doubt that when people move to another city fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, therefore, while, for instance, in fact, kind of, no doubt, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1828.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46943765281 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38547622681 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486552567237 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 598.5 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.4532869851 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.866666667 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2666666667 20.6045352989 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230988914914 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866865138824 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900531281128 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156461577479 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688871452142 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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