Do you agree or disagree？ It is better to relax by watching a movie or reading a book than doing physical exercise. Explain your answer with examples and specific reasons.
The issue of whether watching a movie or reading a book is better for relaxation or doing exercise aroused much controversy among people of different ages and different perspectives. Definitely, some people if were asked, would agree with the statement that watching the movie and reading book help relax while others choose to do exercise. As far as I am concerned, after taking various factors into consideration, I prefer doing exercise to relax myself. In the following paragraph, I will shed light on the arguments to support my view.
The first point to be mentioned is that doing exercise has a great benefit for our health compare with watching a movie and reading books. After a long day of study or work, we need something not just to set free our mind, but also we should select our leisure activity more logically to boost our health. Nowadays, many employees and students suffer from obesity which is one of the significant factors that makes people more susceptible to chronic diseases like diabetes, cardiovascular disease, and high blood pressure. Many of the researches proved that this is because of a sedentary lifestyle that inactive action caused. Therefore, doing exercise is really the best choice for our health.
In approaching this issue, apart from the point stated before, another reason that deserves some words is that doing exercise assist us to abandon all our tensions and stresses. In this hectic life, it is easy to get the stress that we could not simply get rid of this hard situation. Hence, we need an effective solution. When doing exercise, some hormones secrete in our body that helps us to relieve our stress completely. Therefore, it helps us to be more productive and energetic for the next day work. While watching TV and reading a book create a fake relaxation, due to this, many of workers or students feel miserable during their next they that make them so astonish because they postulate they have a good rest. As you see, doing exercise has a long term good effect rather than watching and reading a book.
By the way of conclusion, based on the arguments above, I am of the opinion that doing an exercise can benefit me by getting me a chance to have a healthy lifestyle and also, this attitude would be a great way to get away from all of our tension in this hectic life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...all of our tension in this hectic life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, really, so, therefore, while, apart from, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1927.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 403.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78163771712 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58028963002 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543424317618 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5216805024 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.352941176 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7058823529 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76470588235 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229268411301 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803806837714 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0984395714679 0.0737576698707 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143127818162 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104485546925 0.0645574589148 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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