Do you agree or disagree? It is better to relax by watching a movie or reading a book than doing physical exercise. Explain your answer with examples and specific reasons.
Throuout history, the outstanding role of off-time activities on every individual’s life has been undeniable. Regarding the importance of the issue, a wide variety of aspects of free-time activity have been assessed and discussed. Accordingly, an unavoidable question that always has been the topic of controversy and brought about debates is whether it is better to relax by watching movies and readin books or doing physical exercises. I adhere to the idea that physical exercise is more beneficial. In what follows, two conspicuous reasons will vindicate my standpoint.
The first aspect to point out it that socializing, making friends, and practicing social skills are of the desirable results of a group physical exercise. It is crystal clear that having a regular plan for particioating in a team sport or a group exercise allows one to meet people of different characteristics that can escalate one’s chances of finding people with whom they have a lot in common. Furthermore, having been exposed to a huge amount of positive energy and fun that is caused by the presence of an energitic group for a long time reduces the stress and anxiety that is the concern and issue of the current century. In addition, one can practice and develop their social skills and interactions by experiencing the relationships with different types of people that affects other life’s dimensions. The statistics revealed by a recently conducted research in my country indicate that people who participate in group exercises are about 70 percent more likely to succeed in their professional life and job interviews.
Moreover, one should take into account the fact that not only does exercing give rise to more social skills and wider friends’ networks, but it also consolidate physical health. In this hectic era, people pay less attention to their physical health. Besides, the proliferation of fastfood resturants and convinience foods are the additional causes of reduced physical health among people. Willing to prevent the stageringly high rates of health destruction and diseases, there has to be a controling factor in one’s life. Indeed, physical exercise is by far the best option according to doctors and scholars. For the matter of illustration, I used to have an in-born heart disease that could get worse with stress. I started to attend a basketball class tree times a week. After a while, my heart ackes slowly started decreasing. Had I not attended that class, I would still have those problems and ackes.
In conclusion, I believe that exercise is the better choice based on a myriad of reasons only two of which were discussed above. Consequently, it is highly recommended that people do not neglect the importance of having a regular plan for physical exercise.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, still, while, as to, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2353.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 450.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22888888889 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99577397819 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573333333333 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 739.8 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4774313503 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.047619048 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.80952380952 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113619018903 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0327587758455 0.076458572812 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529718716335 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0808229422577 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414632739603 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 137.0 86.8835125448 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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