Do you agree or disagree？ It is better to relax by watching a movie or reading a book than doing physical exercise. Explain your answer with examples and specific reasons.
Without any shadow of doubt, a hectic life is omnipresent phenomena, and the way people getting relaxed plays a prominent role in every individual’s lives. Although some people might adhere to the idea that it is better to relax by reading a book or watching a movie, others possess the conviction that doing physical activities is a more suitable call. As far as I am concerned, watching movies and reading books is a pragmatic approach to get rid of daily life stress. I will elaborate on my reasons through the following paragraphs.
To start with, one should take into account that one way to find mental peace is to be distracted. movies and books are one of the best means to make one’s mind distracted, because they consist of a myriad different subjects. different genres could be amusing and after watching them, people feel fresh and somehow happy. consider you had a bad day at work: your boss was upset with you because a failure in the project, you had a huge fight with your colleague, and you missed the bus getting home. you arrive home and turn on the tv and a comedy movie is playing. you sit down and watch it. after successive laughs you will feel better, because your mind was distracted for a while. it helps you to put things into a perspective, and relax for some time. A relevant study in Norway argues that people who watch tv series as a recreational activity, have 31% specific hormone of feel relaxed in their blood. This could account for the effect of watching movies and their impact on relaxation.
Another key thing I would like to mention is that films and books could be quite educational. it is a commonly held belief that our brain is very capable of learning, and every data we let in our mind has an effect. so, by choosing the books and movies with educational context, people could make a good of the free time they spend to get relaxed. take a personal experience as an example: back to the time I was a teenager I had a hard time during school, thus I used to read science-fiction novels after school trying to forget about it. The reading helped me to learn many new things and get excited, the tiredness was gone and I felt so fresh to resume my daily activities. Had I did not read those books, I would not have been able to learn so many things, and to choose the major I was interested in.
To bring everything into conclusion, I am of the view that watching films and reading books are desirable to relax, due to the fact that they are distractive and educational. it is recommended that people who want to get relax by movies and books not only should consider an interesting subject for the movie, but should be careful about the quality of the context.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, thus, while, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2234.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 491.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54989816701 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70728369723 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57610505499 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517311608961 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 695.7 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9558942343 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.545454545 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3181818182 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.77272727273 5.45110844103 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251153991229 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686297739654 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531840378404 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146306309833 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567706857065 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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