Do you agree or disagree? It is better to use your own knowledge and experience to solve problems than to ask other people for advice.
By and large, it is established beyond doubt that life is full of challenges and arduous situation. In this regard, relationships and interactions with others are of paramount importance. Vividly, humans are a social animal and cannot live without interactions. While living along, they come across many hardships. Some people consider clearing those obstacles based on their knowledge and experience, whereas others contemplate seeking guidance from their elders or colleagues. As for the writer's opinion, I subscribe to the latter idea, In what follows, I will delve into the most crucial reasons to substantiate my viewpoint.
The first compelling reason corroborating my idea is that asking others for advice or suggestion will provide the opportunity for people to see a big picture of the occurrence. It is axiomatic that they start to think out of the box; and meanwhile, get beneficial pieces of information from other experiences. It is worth mentioning that all humans encounter some sort of problems during their lifetime; so, one's experience can be used to solve other's matter. MY own example is justified enough to elucidate my standpoint. Five years ago, when I planned to buy my first Ford car, I was extremely confused because of choice overload. I didn't think that my dad could help as he did not know modern technology. I so was overwhelmed with the features that I discussed my problem with my dad. To my extreme shock, he was more expertise in this field than I would have thought. In reality, he expressed that he experienced the same difficulty in selecting his car and learned technical experience. In fact, he introduced me to his friend working in Ford motor company, and I was able to get a twent percent discount. if I had not considered asking my father for advice, I would not have been able to buy my favorite car at a low price.
The second rationale behind my opinion is rooted in the fact that seeking suggestions from others helps you strengthen relationships. To be more specific, a person develops trust and a strong bond. In certain circumstances, asking opinions from others may result in the enhancement of knowledge. My brother's experience is a compelling example of this. Last semester when he was in 10 grade, he was having difficulty in mathematics. That is why he was continuously failing the subject, he discussed it with me. Thankfully, I was able to give him the assistance that he needs. not only it developed our relation even closer, but also he was able to get success in his mathematic class. Hence, it is crystal clear, that my guidance endorsed his success and bring us closer.
By perusing the above paragraphs, one can infer that getting someone's assistance in solving our problems is always advantageous. For the sake of brevity, a couple of points are worth reiterating, First, it will provide us with valuable information; second, it prospers our relationships. As for this writer's advice, I vehemently urge people to take the courage and discuss their problems with their loved ones to get direction.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'writers'' or 'writer's'?
Suggestion: writers'; writer's
... their elders or colleagues. As for the writers opinion, I subscribe to the latter idea...
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Suggestion: one's
... of problems during their lifetime; so, ones experience can be used to solve others ...
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... confused because of choice overload. I didnt think that my dad could help as he did ...
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... give him the assistance that he needs. not only it developed our relation even clo...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'writers'' or 'writer's'?
Suggestion: writers'; writer's
...prospers our relationships. As for this writers advice, I vehemently urge people to tak...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, second, so, then, whereas, while, as for, in fact, sort of, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 83.0 43.0788530466 193% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2554.0 1977.66487455 129% => OK
No of words: 512.0 407.700716846 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98828125 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75682846001 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95989375981 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 288.0 212.727598566 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 799.2 618.680645161 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 24.0 9.59856630824 250% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6545376507 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0689655172 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6551724138 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.65517241379 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153834303652 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0369133697466 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460669680837 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0899972704166 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322792742122 0.0645574589148 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 137.0 86.8835125448 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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