Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is better to use your own knowledge and experience to solve problems than to ask other people for advice

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to use your own knowledge and experience to solve problems than to ask other people for advice.

The cast majority of people might believe that using their own knowledge, skills, and experiences will help them make a better decision rather than asking help from the others. While this might true in some context, I personally prefer to combine our indvidual set of skills plus years of experience and asking the expert or rich experienced people to beg an input to deal with our obstacles.

It is undeniably positive idea to trust our own skills and experience for problem solving. Through the years of study and learning from our mistakes would make us wiser and better decision maker. To be an expert, people have to collect at least 10,000 hours working experience to be an expert. That is way, in some cases, a rooky need to work late to master their skills. Learning this skills will make them gain more confidence when it comes to the decision making for themselves or for the company. While this activity might boost their confidence, I believe the other way around to be a better decision maker.

I believe learing from those expert in the specific field would make us even better decision leader. As the world we live today are more complicated than it is in the past, and as the consequences we might not have enough time to learn a new skill every day. Beside of that, we have our obligation to finish our duty or work first above the others, such as learning a new skill. It would be much simpler to just ask from the expert or the senior staff or workers if we have a problem to be encountered. That is way, I prefer combining our expertise with others’ experience to make the team or personal goal achieved.

To sum up, combining our personal skills and input from the expert will make us solving the problem wisely and accurately.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 382, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, while, at least, such as, in some cases, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 312.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64743589744 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42233064074 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50641025641 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2943887545 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.571428571 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164725974747 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632649821043 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511492211551 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110168689148 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474841295985 0.0645574589148 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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