Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
With the fast-growing automobile industry and huge demand for mobile cars, I believe the opposite of the statement, there will be a huge number of cars on the street after this decade. Two reasons drive the increasing number of the use of this land transportation vehicle, the friend would be the demand of safety and comfort transportation mode that could easily drive the people away and the second one is because the massive research on improving the driving quality, lead the people to drive more efficiently and comfortably.
On one hand, selecting the best transportation mode, people tend to prefer safety and comfortable way over the remaining criteria. This personal preference lead citizen to use more personal space while using the transportation mode. This resulting the private vehicle such as city cars would be more popular with the wealthy and middle-income classes. On the other hand, public transportation is hardly able to offer personal space as it will be loaded with a full pack of passengers in one carrier. This is resulting the millennial being encouraged to not using mass transportation and using private vehicles instead.
The recent application of the latest cutting-edge technology drives the price of cars more affordable. The use of a highly efficient machine that claims to increase combustion efficiency leads the core engine machine to do better and faster. In addition, using smart artificial intelligence technology make people driving the car easier and intriguing the new adapters to use the car since the marketing product launch its product. Therefore, the improvement of technology used on car transportation drives the market even bigger.
To sum up, safety and comfort is the main reason this generation verdict to opt using cars and the use of modern technology in cats enhance the demand of this type of vehicle.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, therefore, while, in addition, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 43.0788530466 28% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 300.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21333333333 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93686151453 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536666666667 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.0555318341 48.9658058833 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.333333333 100.406767564 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186209888618 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078865896441 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388020532325 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114721217908 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021231571116 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 58.1214874552 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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