Do you Agree or Disagree with : It is more important to keep old friends than to make new friends.
It is critically important as a social-being to establish close personal relationships, often referred to as ‘friends’ in order to enrich our life. Personally, I believe that one should maintain old friendships as long as possible rather than making new ones. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, friends with whom you have spent a considerable amount of time together provide you with a sense of comfort. They are an integral part of some of your most cherished moments in life. You feel more like yourself in their presence. They are the ones who know you in and out, and can make you do stuff that you previously never even imagined of. My personal experience is a compelling illustration for this. I am a very shy dancer, so it is impossible to make me dance in front of people I hardly know. But when I am out with some of my longest-known college friends, I don’t feel anxious or shy to groove on a beat.
Furthermore, in case of any emergencies you are more likely to contact an older friend for help. An older friend is more trustworthy than a newly acquainted friend, so in need of a crisis he is the first one to pop-up in your mind. For instance, after starting my new job, on the very first day, my car had a flat tire in the parking lot. My first instinct was to call my friend who lived far away from the office rather than contacting a colleague in the same building. So, even though I had to wait a longer time for help to arrive, I felt comfortable. This proves that we can often rely on friends whom we have known for a longer time.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that you should try to cherish and sustain old friends rather than making new ones. This is because they are like your personal security blanket, so you don’t even hesitate to share your secrets or personal desires. In addition, they make you feel safe, comfortable and can be of help times of need.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so, as to, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 358.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48044692737 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63743365848 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54469273743 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.903953514 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.4210526316 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8421052632 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42105263158 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329641555276 0.236089414692 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943222513257 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850587202897 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197859305081 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0183525359088 0.0645574589148 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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