Do you agree or disagree? Life is today easier and more comfortable than when your grandparents were a children.
Nowadays, people are so founded to old, and nostalgic times. People state, the old time when our grandparents were children is a better compared to now. They think life was easier than now, since they had no lots of work. People wish they would have lived at those times. However, I believe now life is easier, and more comfortable than the time when our grandparents were children for two reason, which in the following essay I will explain.
First of all, the reason to be mention is the internet. I am a student, especially for me internet is a big boon, and amenity for me. World is changing and improving. Every systems in the community change, with respect to these innovations. Today we use internet every part of our life, such as communication, transportation, education. Without internet everything might be so difficult. For example, the communication was not that much easy at past. Also, to reach the required information they needed to go library which is big waste of time. For now, we can get the information in a second, we can order a food in a second, even we can see our friends from overseas countries with no disruption. Thus, I believe today life is easier, and more comfortable than the past when our grandparents were children.
Furthermore, the second reason is, the transportation. With the new inventions in the science, people developed plenty aspects to make the life easier, and more comfortable, such as transportation. People might claim, at the past they have also vehicle, but they provide the transportation, with the power of animals which is o primitive method. However, today the transportation is easier. For instance, when people can reach their destination in a couple, or week of days at past, today we can reach to the other side of the world in an hours. This example clearly indicates how the transportation makes the life more comfortable compared to past, when our grandparents were children. Hence, in my view now life is more comfortable with the today’s transportation facilities than the past.
In nut shell, I strongly believe today life is easier, and more comfortable than when our grandparents were children, because today we have internet that we use every part of our life, such as transportation, communication even in kitchen. Additionally, the transportation makes our life more comfortable compared to past, since we can get our destination in an hour, but at past there were no facility like that, and they could arrive in couple, or weeks of days.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 608, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'food'.
Suggestion: food
...e information in a second, we can order a food in a second, even we can see our friend...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 537, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...reach to the other side of the world in an hours. This example clearly indicates h...
^^
Line 5, column 537, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an hour' or simply 'hours'?
Suggestion: an hour; hours
...reach to the other side of the world in an hours. This example clearly indicates how the...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, so, thus, for example, for instance, such as, first of all, in my view, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2102.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 424.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95754716981 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03745384253 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455188679245 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 650.7 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 11.0 1.86738351254 589% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.2277481586 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5833333333 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312354054452 0.236089414692 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10394476959 0.076458572812 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140929260722 0.0737576698707 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238139874307 0.150856017488 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527085874248 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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