Do you agree or disagree with this statement that Working in a group is better option or working alone?
Working has a crucial role in our life. Everbody around us works in a particular way. Children works
in the form of study, adults work in the form of jobs or business. Some people think that working
independently is more important. Perhaps, according to them while working independently a person could
learn more. On the other hand, a major number of people around us prefer working in a group. I am one of
such people. I my view, in a group is more important than working alone. Here, I am going to enumerate some
of my reasons to support my opinion.
It is a rule of nature that nobody in this world could survives alone. Therefore, God has made
relatives and friends. The situation is also similar in the case of working. To complete a task we have to get
help from somebody. For example, in first year of my pharmacy school, I used to think that as I am heading
towards professional life, so I should start doing every thing by my self. That was the reason that even for
some class group projects, I specifically requested my teachers to assign me a topic individually. My teachers
tried to tell me that it's better to work in a group. But at that time I was very passionate about my future. So
when the time of presenting my projects came, I was shocked by seeing that everybody got really good
marks, except me. I was very disheart after my failure. Then one of my teachers told me that I should learn
how to work in a team and it would certainly help be in my future also. Therefore, I tood mt next project with
a team and end up getting A grade in it.
Furthermore, it's a famous saying that, work smarter not harder. Working in a team is also an example
of smart working. While working in a team you could easily divide your task and get a work done with in
shorter period of time and with less effort. For instance, when my father started his own business of medicines
distributon. He was alone in the begining. So, to fulfill his dream of a successfull business he had to take
help of his friends. So they end up dividing their tasks. My father used to handle all he orders and his friends
took the task of delivering them. Eventually, their company became popular in our area with in a period of
few years. My father used to say that his success would not have been possible without his and his friend team
effort.
To sum up, though some people might have a different opinion, but I think that working in a team is
more important. It not only helps you in learning team work and reduce your stress, but also gives you a fast and better way to success. That is the reson most people believe on the saying that, union is a strenght
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 56, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'survive'
Suggestion: survive
... nature that nobody in this world could survives alone. Therefore, God has made relativ...
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Line 15, column 67, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...it would certainly help be in my future also. Therefore, I tood mt next project with...
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Line 17, column 14, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...up getting A grade in it. Furthermore, its a famous saying that, work smarter not ...
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Line 19, column 9, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...sk and get a work done with in shorter period of time and with less effort. For instance, whe...
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Line 26, column 51, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to team'
Suggestion: to team
...tant. It not only helps you in learning team work and reduce your stress, but also g...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, really, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i think, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 78.0 43.0788530466 181% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 52.1666666667 140% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2192.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 496.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41935483871 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45921135193 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502016129032 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 676.8 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.6003584229 165% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9608134747 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.4705882353 100.406767564 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5882352941 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.97058823529 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.53405017921 551% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244662336128 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640527984908 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706555926022 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0713302312115 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719446619409 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 11.7677419355 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.76 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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