do you agree or disagree?It is better to make friends with intelligent people than with the people who have a good sense of humor.
That in today's world influences of friends on individuals is an axiom, friends should be taken into consideration key factors that directly play impressive roles in various levels of one's behavior and beliefs . A question, which is a matter of debate, a controversial one, is, whether intelligent persons are preferred or persons having a sense of humorous. Humorous friends can be in favor of some people, however, I strongly agree that the benefits of making friendship with intelligent persons are too enormous to fathom.
To commence on of the compelling reasons that justifies the thesis is the prosperity of persons is highly dependent on one's friends. Due to paradigm shifts in communication between persons, hectic life requires persons who can make fortifying decisions, intelligent friends are valuable treasures facilitating one's life. Individuals need to confide their daily stress and decisions to their friends broadening their horizons. every person has preoccupations which if are subjected to clever persons, will be greatly solved, inasmuch as they always attempt to work at their apex and can create versatility approaches to solve their challenges, their friends can also learn abundant views of them. Let us consider a situation in which a student can discuss his different concerns about his studying, job and family with his smart friends and finds efficient views promoting his horizons, hence he will attain substantial prosperity in the near future, by contrast, if he consults to humorous friends who cannot give him efficient points, he will be deprived of great points impressing his life positively.
Alongside with the first reason elaborated above, the importance of behavior derived from a smart mind requires meticulous attention. To put it in general words, clever persons can fairly assess a condition and behave greatly, since manner is a mirror which reflects one's mind, hence rarely they behave negatively. In addition, clever friends are capable of consulting their friends in predicaments, so their Interacting can be considered permanent friendships, by contrast, a humorous person can often give others an enjoyable sense, however, this sense is temporary. For instance, I have a friend who is greatly enjoyable, although having rested and disported with her, I have never considered her as a reliable friend inasmuch as her points are not accurate, accordingly seldom can they support me and it causes in predicaments I feel alone. However, what I mentioned above might not be overgeneralized to all contexts, there are individuals making friends with them can bring a feeling of delight and enjoyable which never be supplanted with other things.
Drawing upon the reasons, I am to a great extent that persons require friends who can share various aspects of their life, life is replete with various aspects not only humorous aspects. To recapitulate the reasons, making friend with intelligent persons not only can promote one’s views but also can make more profound friendships.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, for instance, i feel, in addition, in general, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2570.0 1977.66487455 130% => OK
No of words: 476.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39915966387 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9138304371 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548319327731 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 781.2 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.9535590008 48.9658058833 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.333333333 100.406767564 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.7333333333 20.6045352989 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 5.45110844103 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210067819344 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832391985293 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598591428726 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155704751918 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364870267432 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 11.7677419355 169% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 58.1214874552 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.1575268817 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 10.9000537634 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.01818996416 121% => OK
difficult_words: 137.0 86.8835125448 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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