Do you prefer or not always telling truth is good for relationship.
This is the controversial issue whether always telling the truth is good in relationship or not. However, in my perspective, I believe that, always telling the truth may be cause of unhappiness, broken relationship and sometime dangerous as well. I fell this way for several reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, I assumes that, telling the truth always may be the cause of sadness. If someone go to the birthday party and he/she not like the decoration of the party and tell that truth with the birthday boy. Then what happened? Of course he fell very bad and unhappy. And this is not good for the birthday boy as well us too, because after that the relation may be not remaining good rather than past.
Secondlly, I think that, telling the actual story may be dangerous too. My personal example is the compelling example of this. My neighbor is died in accident in foreign country and someone told that event with his mother. After that his mother was socked to hear that news and she was died because of heart attack. His wife was mentally sick after hearing that news. In this type of case we have to be carefull while we give the information of the bad news.
moreover, I am of the opinion that telling the truth always can break the relationship of friends, husband-wife, parents-children, neighborhood country as well.
That's why, I Personally suppose the idea that telling always the actual story is not good because of unhappiness and dangerous situation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ildren, neighborhood country as well. Thats why, I Personally suppose the idea that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, then, well, while, i think, of course, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 1977.66487455 63% => OK
No of words: 260.0 407.700716846 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78076923077 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68950128458 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 212.727598566 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511538461538 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 618.680645161 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2006058627 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6875 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274870986907 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884930638752 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102886467788 0.0737576698707 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178827749412 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0997301561247 0.0645574589148 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 86.8835125448 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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