Early birds or night owls
One of the most significant elements that affects the successfulness of people is the time they choose to work. Some people are night owls, -or, to put it another way they can work more efficiently at night, especially the people who rely on sheer quiet time of they. While there might be many people that prefer to get up later and work during the night, I subscribe to this idea that it is better to get up early in the morning and be active during day. I believe the ones who are active during the day get a greater chance to find a job, communicate with others and have more effective time to either relax or handle their career.
At first, all the working places - like companies, universities and so on- start their activities early in the morning. For this simple reason that, the people who want to work in these position must choose their sleeping time during the night. Otherwise, those who don’t sleep at night will have no sufficient efficiency at their job, thus they can neither do get promotion at their job nor do have guarantee to doesn't get fired. So, being an early bird is very important and effective for those who intend to work in such places.
Second, it is well known that human beings need social life as well as personal life. What I mean is that everyone requires to have some solitary time and at the same time need to communicate with others. Due to the fact that the ordinary time at which the most people start their activities is in the morning and they are awake during the day, the people who want to attend their social life must be early birds. For example, I used to be a night owl person, and because most of my friends and family are early birds, I couldn’t spend time with them. Accordingly, I became a depressed person and alone.
Third, psychologically and medically speaking, the best sleeping time for everyone to sleep is between 10 p.m. o'clock to 5 a.m. o'clock. Some hormones that their task is regulating the nervous system will secrete in mind during sleeping time just in sleeping. Additionally, statistics show that if people get a good night's sleep, the ability of their mind would enhance and they can do their tasks in a better way. So they can do their job in shorter time with a better performance that results in saving more time.
All in all, it is more profitable for everyone to get awake early in morning because they will be more successful in their job and social life, and also they will have a healthier lifestyle in comparison to people who are awake during night.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 406, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'guaranteed'.
Suggestion: guaranteed
... get promotion at their job nor do have guarantee to doesnt get fired. So, being an early...
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Line 2, column 419, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...n at their job nor do have guarantee to doesnt get fired. So, being an early bird is v...
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Line 4, column 112, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: o'clock
...or everyone to sleep is between 10 p.m. oclock to 5 a.m. oclock. Some hormones that th...
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Line 4, column 129, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: o'clock
...eep is between 10 p.m. oclock to 5 a.m. oclock. Some hormones that their task is regul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, if, second, so, third, thus, well, while, for example, i mean, in short, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2088.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 458.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55895196507 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41654139232 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471615720524 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 655.2 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.8529924169 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4444444444 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05555555556 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157347678639 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534617684684 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620331137136 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0937838394105 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378934608893 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.