Education is the key to success at work / agree or disagree?
Nowadays, most students around the world continuing their study until PHD because they believe who educated are more successful on their life. I strongly agree.
First, when you have more knowledge and degree, there will be more opportunities for you to do your professional and personal growth in a life. A person who have higher education will have more skills. Such as, I graduated nurse school 3 years ago and after that I start working as a paramedic nurse in the fire station. I learn lots of things here. My manager who is my husband is encouraging me, to study online and get my master too. he has 3 degrees from 2 famous universities and always he is successful on his job. He always said to our children, when you start understanding its importance, you will experience a great change in your life. After understanding yourself and your skills, you may reach your vision and dreams. In this way, you feel that you are doing the very enjoyable thing to get success in your life.
Second, Education is important because it gives a different perspective on life and establishes a personal opinion after analyzing the situation. Also, latest technologies are developed and used in different areas like health, economy, other business. For example, doctors find the solutions to the dangerous diseases, cause, and prevention of these diseases. People will not make the difference between right and wrong until they are educateing. It is clearly shown no person can open the doors of opportunities and success in life without being educated. The key to success usually depends on educated people. Education also gives a sense of management and patient. it Is the last way to improve communication skills.
In conclusion, the most important thing that you need to remember about education is that it helps the people to gain personal control on their lives. educate opens the doors for various opportunities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, second, so, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 320.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.003125 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79543258895 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578125 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.465698711 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.2380952381 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2380952381 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 5.45110844103 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139800555569 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451603016646 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667353906066 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906188250112 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274907734091 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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