Essay topics: A parent wants to help his or her child become better at a skill such as playing a musical instrument or competing in a sport. Some people believe that the best way to do so is for the parent to require the child to practice every day for a set number of minutes or hours. Other people believe that it is best for the parent to encourage the child to practice only as much as the child wishes, with no requirement about the amount of time spent practicing. Which view do you agree with and why?
It is no doubt that parents have most significant influence in children lives. Many activities, which kids are enjoying, comes from mother’s and father’s ideas. Some people believe that it is necessary for the parent to encourage the child for activity every day, other may think that the child should decide about amount of time spent on activities. In my opinion parents should watch and guide their children all the time, a specially in the early years of their living.
First of all, Children are very lazy these days. It is hard to believe, but kids have too much free time when we compare it with past. Because of that, parents should focus more on youth to encourage them in activity what they like. For example: I remember when I was young, I had my own responsibilities assigned by parents and to avoid punishment, I was forced to accomplish them. When I see my young, spoiled nephew, I think that because of my brother working ours which is 14 hours per day, his son do not have enough motivation to play soccer.
Secondly, Many different and mostly time wasting activities are distracting children. Consequently, Things like tv or computer games are consuming enormous amount of time, which kids could use for more interesting and useful activities to improve their abilities in future professional career, but to do that, They need to have an instructor to explain them that hard work is necessary win. For example, latest evidence shows that 75% of youth who is repeating activities everyday are more likely to success when parents are encourage them. That explain very important role of parents.
In conclusion, It is important for parents to help children during their childhood. Without doubt that laziness and useless activities are serious problem for current youth generation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 11, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'Many'.
Suggestion: Many
...motivation to play soccer. Secondly, Many different and mostly time wasting activities are ...
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Line 5, column 403, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the latest'.
Suggestion: , the latest
... hard work is necessary win. For example, latest evidence shows that 75% of youth who is...
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Line 5, column 473, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...5% of youth who is repeating activities everyday are more likely to success when parents...
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Line 5, column 526, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'encouraged'.
Suggestion: encouraged
...more likely to success when parents are encourage them. That explain very important role ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, as for, for example, i think, in conclusion, no doubt, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 301.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0365448505 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70533501445 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581395348837 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.5758864141 48.9658058833 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.066666667 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 5.45110844103 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187013406294 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618540774124 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774250012193 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125107908368 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544615952724 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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