Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are never satisfied with what they have; they always want something more or something different. Use specific reasons to support your answer.
People’s satisfaction is one of the most important topic for discussion. Some people think that people are to greedy, and they are never satisfied, other may disagree. In this essay I will explain why first of them have right.
First of all, since very beginning of human existence, People always desired a power. There were always differences between people, some of them were stronger than the other. Moreover, stronger groups thought that they can possess other, weaker people to use them for own business. For example, lets look at the slaves in early years of United States of America existence. Strong, leadership masters were in possess of weak, not intelligent slaves, because they were too weak to fight for their freedom.
Secondly, People are extremely jealous. This is a next example of human bad nature. People who have less, always watch with anger at these, who have more. And because of that, we have so many problems with our existence. For instance: I remember fight between two neighbors of mine. If on them had bought new car, at the next day, second neighbor bought better and more expensive car just to show how he is rich and powerful.
Last but not least, People do not want to be equal. It is hard to understand why, but people have problem with equality. They are always looking for differences between other humans. Moreover, people are so rude for each other, that They laugh from every detail which makes somebody different. For example: My schoolmates always laugh from my backpack because it was pink, and as we all heard, pink is a girl’s color, but who says that man cannot wear pink items?
In conclusion, People will always search for something, we cannot change it. Instead of fighting each other, We should united to make our life better, but this is never going to happen because of human race nature which we cannot cheat.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o says that man cannot wear pink items? In conclusion, People will always search...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 321.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8753894081 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3873500013 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591900311526 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2825895417 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5238095238 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2857142857 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38095238095 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191747166789 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627776051539 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525956825159 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108252515507 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408969161688 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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