Essay topics: TPO-23 - Independent Writing Task
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The modern world forced us to do every jobs and activities hastily. Some people argue that to keep up with ever changing information and data we need to finishing a job quickly without considering the impact of our decision. However, I disagree with the statement because of certain job needs panache and exacting work to produce elaborate, useful and impactful result. In addition, some type of job can not afford a mistake because the detrimental effect that the wrongdoing does. Furthermore, the extensive networking between regional and international area made the reliable status of business more important than ever thus one mistake may harm the reputation that build in years.
The acme of work born from arduous, diligent and fastidious person. The result that become an epitome of success needs time to finish. Hence the job that done hastily sometimes have low quality and unuseful for other. For example, the doctor who do a research about cancer drugs needs to be careful with the data and correct a confounding data with extensive research in a very long time because if the scientist do the job haphazardly, the effect may be worse than a failure to found the cure of cancer. However, if he or she does the job with careful consideration, the results may beneficial for the rest of the world.
The other thing to consider, the mistakes that comes from a hastily done job coud deleterious to the object of interest. The companies may lose their budget, the president may lose the vote, and the doctor may kill a patient. For instance, the doctor, who stitched a patient quickly without proper cleaning and sterilization, could causing the patient horrendous scar that may never erased, moreover, the patient may got bacterial infection that could pernicious to his/her wellbeing.
Finally, in the face of advancement of information technology, the faulty product or decision would spread widely thus impact our title and credibility. Only one unintended mistake may ruin all the accomplishment we gain over the years. In conclusion, we cannot do a job as fast as we could and disregard the result. For example, the tennis star, Miss Sharapova was caught use an enhancing performance drugs although she didn’t know that the drugs is prohibited. Consequently, she get suspension and also lose her good reputation.
All things considered, I disagree with the statement provided. I believe regardless the era or time period, job needs to be contemplated seriously and done beautifully because the impact of the result could be harmful for others.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...pitome of success needs time to finish. Hence the job that done hastily sometimes hav...
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Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...r other. For example, the doctor who do a research about cancer drugs needs to be careful ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 333, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'cause'
Suggestion: cause
...roper cleaning and sterilization, could causing the patient horrendous scar that may ne...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 487, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
... drugs is prohibited. Consequently, she get suspension and also lose her good reput...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2154.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 421.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11638954869 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83543799884 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546318289786 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 673.2 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 15.0 3.08781362007 486% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3251754911 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.7 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.05 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10236422368 0.236089414692 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0335728967823 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358630050426 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0575995203659 0.150856017488 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421959789911 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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