Essay topics: TPO-14 - Independent Writing Task
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Travelling becomes a new craze around the world. Either the destination is regional or international, travelling itself become a major product that increase economics and prosperity of the local community around the touristic site. Some people argues that local citizen should explore their own natural wonders before foraging other countries sites however I disagree with this statement. Take a vacation abroad not only augments people knowledge but also enhances skill that advantageous in the face of different circumstances and cultures. Moreover travelling outside of the country gives a venue for people to practice their foreign language.
People learn a new perspective and different value from travelling abroad. Sometimes, everyday life with people from our own ethnic that walk and talk with the similar common sense restricts our mind to accept different tradition or religion. We bombarded by news that picture some group or race in generalized character that not only wrong but also disrespectful. Therefore, when we experience the tradition we will see different angle from those people life. Understand their circumstances and broaden our mind to different norm and value.
Additionally, the new environment forces us to adjust with different circumstances. We practice tolerance, communication skill, and understanding to other people. When we surrounded with different ambiance, we needs to practice the traditional practice of the people. Sometimes, it is very hard but after awhile it increases our ability to confer to foreign people and respect other culture.
Lastly, travelling gives us new medium to practice a foreign language. Sometime when we use the different language, people may considers that tawdry or contentious but when you actually sit in the middle of the related nation surrounded by the indigenous people, you considers polite and diligent, since you try hard to apprehend their language. The proficiency of different language also an added value in the employment world.
All things considered, the out of country travelling gives substantial benefit to the person who does it. From The knowledge, the amiability, and the fluency of the foreign language, it is very attractive to some group of people thus international travelling is ineluctable.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 543, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...f different circumstances and cultures. Moreover travelling outside of the country gives...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 211, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'need'
Suggestion: need
... surrounded with different ambiance, we needs to practice the traditional practice of...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 306, Rule ID: FOR_AWHILE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'a while'?
Suggestion: a while
...e. Sometimes, it is very hard but after awhile it increases our ability to confer to f...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 268, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'consider'
Suggestion: consider
...urrounded by the indigenous people, you considers polite and diligent, since you try hard...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, lastly, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1952.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57714285714 4.8611393121 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00916152129 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537142857143 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1955623717 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.736842105 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4210526316 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224826292171 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734441036106 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556344334845 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131498663074 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482923248651 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 10.9000537634 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30
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