Essay topics: TPO-47 - Independent Writing Task
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
The facilitation of information circulation makes it much more convenient to get access to up-to-date events around the world. Whereas, most of these are viturally irrelavant to everyday life. thus, it is unwise for us to be preoccupied with the crowding information.
In this day and age, we are, in most cases, supposed to complete some work or learn new ability. instead, if we are indulged in events in the media, we will spare no time to do things related to ourselves. Owing to the current media propaganda methods, no matter how dull the event is, it can be vividly depicted to seize audiences' attention. Once we catch a glimpse of it, we are driven to search for more information related to it and to judge all the celebrities' attitudes towards it. that is indeed a waste of time. In the end, we obtain nothing but meaningless information completedly isolated from our life sphere.
Furthermore, despite the fact that superficially irrelavant events may involve in or even interfere with our life in an implicit way, but the possibility of such involvement and the benefit we may acquire due to our attention is so trivial that they are clearly outweighed by the negative aspects. The major events ranging in the media are mainly commercial propaganda rather than really significant stuff. The heated news are inundated with stars' personal life, or the debates or even conflict between famous celebrities. such news are not informative to us, newsworthy though, thus will not bring us rewarding information. we can dedicate time spent on that to more meaningfui activities to get ourselves promoted.
Granted, the necessity of expanding our horizon should not be neglected. However, we should not achieve this aim by concentrating on the headlines or waiting for eyes-catching news. instead, we should focus on news in tune with our interest, or events that will interfere with the wellbeing of the society. we can focus on the downsided workers, the poor patients, or other minority of the society, but we should not follow the trend in the media without further thoughts.
Consequently, we should not try to know what is happening in the world, no matter whether it is worthwhile to pay attention to. we should try to build up ourselves and select the information beneficial to us in the streams of news and events.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... to up-to-date events around the world. Whereas, most of these are viturally irrelavant...
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Line 1, column 194, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thus
... viturally irrelavant to everyday life. thus, it is unwise for us to be preoccupied ...
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Line 2, column 97, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Instead
...omplete some work or learn new ability. instead, if we are indulged in events in the me...
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Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an implicit way" with adverb for "implicit"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...olve in or even interfere with our life in an implicit way, but the possibility of such involvemen...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...trivial that they are clearly outweighed by the negative aspects. The major event...
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Line 3, column 504, Rule ID: FAMOUS_CELEBRITY[1]
Message: Use simply 'celebrities'.
Suggestion: celebrities
...or the debates or even conflict between famous celebrities. such news are not informative to us, n...
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Suggestion: Such
...en conflict between famous celebrities. such news are not informative to us, newswor...
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Suggestion: We
...ill not bring us rewarding information. we can dedicate time spent on that to more...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Instead
...ines or waiting for eyes-catching news. instead, we should focus on news in tune with o...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...fere with the wellbeing of the society. we can focus on the downsided workers, the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, really, so, thus, well, whereas, while, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1941.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9641943734 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89568284983 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549872122762 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0923428705 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.05 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.55 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110898292987 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0343808817251 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343156001402 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0682077574433 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267720163003 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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