TPO 41. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teacher were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays.
There is virtually no disagreement on the significance of teachers in the future of society. Despite the fact that knowledge is given priority to by a soaring number of people, it does not necessarily mean that teachers are more appreciated and valued by society.
The scarcity of dependable source of knowledge contribute to the uniqueness of teachers' status in imparting knowledge. In the past, "hungry" students can only get access to up-to-date knowledge by means of teachers. Nonetheless, as the information circulation is facilitated, the irrplaceable position of teachers disappears into air. Thus, we are inclined to learn things on our own and cast doubt on teachers authority. Gradually, the importance of teachers is curtailed in people's mind.
Moreover, owing to the common sense in the past era that knowledge can make a remarkable difference on the future, parents used to interfere less with children's education process. however, the clash between teachers and parents is becoming a central issue in the contemporary pedagogical practice.By the development of economy, some parents receive little schooling but have attained success. such parents are apt to look down on the significance of schooling and regard social experiences and knowledge obtained from practice as the priority. this opinion is not completely incorrect, but is specious at best. children brought by such parents will receive double education, one from school, one from parents. The methods and ideas of these two education usually clash with each other. At this time, parents will at most cases criticize teachers for their rigidity or strictness. The status and importance of teachers are further diminished.
More importantly, knowledge valued today is largely associated with money, power or other direct repayment. however, teachers in school do not majorly impart employable skills. So there is a mismatch between most students' and parents' desire and the aim of pedagogy. SInce education is not simply a training directed to job marketing, but a lifelong process that changes one's value, taste, mindset , etc. Without acquiring the aim of education, students are inclined to blame teachers on their being impractical.
It is not an easy task to admit that teachers in the present society do not receive as much respect as they should do. but we still do not need to reflect on the old ages. What we need to undertake is to raise the awareness in the public to respect teachers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 413, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teachers'' or 'teacher's'?
Suggestion: teachers'; teacher's
...arn things on our own and cast doubt on teachers authority. Gradually, the importance of...
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Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
... less with childrens education process. however, the clash between teachers and parents...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: By
...n the contemporary pedagogical practice.By the development of economy, some parent...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Such
...le schooling but have attained success. such parents are apt to look down on the sig...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...obtained from practice as the priority. this opinion is not completely incorrect, bu...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Children
...ely incorrect, but is specious at best. children brought by such parents will receive do...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...money, power or other direct repayment. however, teachers in school do not majorly impa...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ng, but a lifelong process that changes ones value, taste, mindset , etc. Without ac...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... that changes ones value, taste, mindset , etc. Without acquiring the aim of educa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, nonetheless, so, still, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2091.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 395.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29367088608 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97940739608 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556962025316 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 654.3 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5633062128 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9130434783 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1739130435 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.69565217391 5.45110844103 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149780133867 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412377607239 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400119888555 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882465011885 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248045661255 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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