Essay topics:
TPO-14 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the age of globalization, peoples tend to travel more because of more affordability and more economic boom. Some people like traveling in their countries while other likes to go further. In my personal opinion, I would choose travel different countries rather than traveling my own countries.
First of all, by traveling to different countries peoples experience different geography and different weather. For example, the peoples live in hot weather near equator countries like to travel to cold places, while peoples live in snowy places like to travel to sunny places or some beach during their long winter time. Different countries have different geographical features. For example, a city like Venice, not everyone other than Italians, who lived in that country cannot experience the city. So you have to travel to that city for that sublime experience. Though India has mountains and deserts or beaches, they are completely different from UAE's dessert or Switzerland’s mountains or totally different from Italy's beaches. So, if I want to experience those places, I have to travel.
Our world has so many different ancient cultures and various ancient civilizations, some of them are still alive. And rather than only reading about them on books, I can learn more about them by traveling those places, like Machu-Pichu or Rome. In the Rome Peoples can actually feel the gladiator vibe and you cannot experience those feeling by reading a book or only traveling to your country. So, I think traveling to further actually peoples to relive history. On the other hand, by traveling to different countries peoples meet new peoples and make new friends. That is how peoples can exchange their cultures and their views on each other country. That would actually help countries to maintain good inter-country relationships. Peoples who are learning foreign languages, traveling to the country where the language originates that would be helpful for them and they can learn the language much easier if they talk to the locals to live their cultures. The next important part is the food. Yes, you can taste some Italian or French cuisine in your country and you saved money. But taste a French street food in the in France's street if other experience and that worth the money. For example, some people like to taste wine, cheese, and food and they travel to other countries like Italy or Greece for the love of the food.
The most important thing, traveling and foreign tourist actually help a countries economy. The tourist brings foreign currency and that is precious to a country and tourists are another big source of money. So that is why different countries advertise and try to attract foreign travelers because they know the importance of tourists and how that helps the economy. Some people like to travel in their natives country, but in my opinion traveling to other countries worth a try and more meaningful.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 197, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
... while other likes to go further. In my personal opinion, I would choose travel different countr...
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Line 1, column 230, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to travel'
Suggestion: to travel
... In my personal opinion, I would choose travel different countries rather than traveli...
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Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
..., I have to travel. Our world has so many different ancient cultures and various ancient ci...
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Line 5, column 1094, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[5]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'French street food'.
Suggestion: French street food
... country and you saved money. But taste a French street food in the in Frances street if other exper...
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Line 7, column 73, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...ing and foreign tourist actually help a countries economy. The tourist brings foreign cur...
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Line 7, column 475, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...on traveling to other countries worth a try and more meaningful.
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Line 7, column 500, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ntries worth a try and more meaningful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, so, still, while, for example, i think, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 13.8261648746 210% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2454.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 482.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09128630705 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65753949006 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.42531120332 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 751.5 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3092948428 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3846153846 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5384615385 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253728754183 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084203523284 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477446232815 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188458660678 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374653634785 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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