every child should be raised in home with two parents
Every child should be raised in a proper environment. A growth of a child is mainly dependent on how parents teach them moral values and qualities.Raising child is very important because it will affect rest of the child's life.
I support that every child should be raised in a home with mother and father. Both plays an important part in child's life. Mother is always who understands child well. A child always talks about their problem, school life and all personal problems to a mother. Father always teaches a lesson about the life and the world and always plays games like football, cricket, basketball etc. Nowadays cost of education and living is so high. It is difficult for one parent to manage expenses of education and living. If both mother and father contribute to expenses than a child would get a better education and can live comfortably.
Receiving love from mother and father is always better than receiving love from one.
When a child is brought up with one parent than financial stability is less because all financial expenses of a child are filled by one.A child may feel sad when he/she sees other child's
mother and father.A child may become an anti-social person. One parent has to do all the works so he/she will get less with his/her child.
Finally, it can be concluded that both parents are required in raising their children not only to satisfy children’s needs and fulfill dreams.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, may, so, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 52.1666666667 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 1977.66487455 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 243.0 407.700716846 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85596707819 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5622233313 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 212.727598566 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543209876543 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 618.680645161 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.3127010546 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2857142857 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3571428571 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 5.45110844103 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359014829553 0.236089414692 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143930179292 0.076458572812 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.169718430732 0.0737576698707 230% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179148045982 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112644968597 0.0645574589148 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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