The expression "Never, never give up" means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. Do you agree or disagree?
Probably everyone has heard that we should fight to the end and never give up, nonetheless this viewpoint some drawbacks that make me think otherwise.
To begin with, most likely people give up after suffering many defeats in a row. In that case, we hear from surrounds that we should not stop attempts to reach the goal, yet what about life tries to say something us by this? Maybe our faults are caused by inappropriately chosen field? Consequently, if we follow advices of others, we will be like goats that run forward despite signs that it is better to change the direction of the movement. My feelings are that we should stop being goats and start to follow our heart and dreams. If are in front of a wall, we can simply go around nor to fight with mills. Furthermore, It is going without sayings, that we defeat less frequently when we are following our passions. By this, I mean, that a desire to give up will much rarely appear if we do what we like. Thus, the problem of giving up will be gone, when everyone will do what she/he likes.
What is more, we are getting tired in consequent temps to achieve something, especially if they do not lead us to a wanted result. In that case, our productivity and motivation significantly decrease, so it becomes more profitable to give up and start with the begging. Starting with a blank provides many advantages. First, we will be able to fight with new efforts. Second, there was not a burden of plenty of mistakes that we have made already for reaching the preceding goal. Last but not least, our motivations will be high and nothing will slow down. In addition, starting with the begging provides an opportunity to try new that will be more fit us and we won’t face problems that caused the desire to give up.
To summarize, I feel that the importance of expression is overestimated. Sometimes it is beneficial to give up and start from the begging.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 280, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to field'
Suggestion: to field
...ts are caused by inappropriately chosen field? Consequently, if we follow advices of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, may, nonetheless, second, so, thus, i feel, i mean, in addition, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 342.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61111111111 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62440379852 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558479532164 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6019995518 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.10526315789 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128812500274 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409478426783 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411019835448 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918697072474 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215183796201 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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