Studying foodways – what foods people eat and how they produce ,acquire,prepare,and consume them-is the best way to gain deep understanding of a culture.
What can we say about peoples' culture by their food patterns? Some would argue that now foodways does not determine the culture and customs of the nations since the process of globalization destroy the borders between different kitchens, so any person has access to all kind of food. Nonetheless, others would state that the culture keeps a connection with food traditions in countries. The reason for that is that food patterns profoundly affect fairy tails, folklore.
To begin with, some may say that we lose our individuality in terms of food.This can happen since the food preferences are determined not by traditions but by the commerce and fashion. For instance, Japanese food was trendy in recent years in Russia. It was quite challenging to find a person, who did not try both to cook sushi and to go to Japan restaurants.The principal reason for this fashion was commerce that popularized this kind of food. However, this not prevent from consuming traditional food. According to the surveys that were accomplished in Moscow, Japan food does not influence the traditional food for New Year. Tradition dishes such as Olivie and salads with fish became the ground of new year. I knew that the situation in America is the same. No one is able to force Americans to reject from turkeys on Thanksgiving Day. Thus the globalization, commerce and fashion do affect the foodways, but not determine them is the reason why food patterns keep their significance.
On the other hand, foodways formed by affecting various specialties that different nations have, so they are a perfect source to understand culture. All nations have different products to grow or different animals to hunt. This is the reason, why kitchen of all nations is si highly diverse one from another. For instance, northern nationalities of Russia are not able to plant any vegetation because of serve climate that they live in. They cannot hunt since the environment does not provide enough food for developing big animals such as moose, so the only source of food for these nations is fish. That leads to high diversity in fish preparation and using of fish as a symbol in fairy tails. That shows us the link between food patterns and culture. Both of them are formed under the pressure of environments, so they have to be connected. If we turn to people, who lived in central or south regions of Russia focused on vegetal food because they have a lot of lands those are suitable for growing food. These traits of food patterns exist to now and have reflected in culture. The examples for that is that Ukraine culture, that was the south region of Russia is highly connected with fields through the folklore. This is a link between culture and foodways.
Ultimately, after considering both sides of the issue, it must be concluded that foodways provide insight into nations' cultures. Food patterns are a reliable source of information since they are not significantly impacted by commerce and fashion and because they are inextricably linked with culture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, nonetheless, so, thus, for instance, kind of, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 58.6224719101 130% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2531.0 2235.4752809 113% => OK
No of words: 509.0 442.535393258 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97249508841 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74984508646 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70358116756 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485265225933 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 776.7 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.4645161726 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7407407407 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8518518519 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07407407407 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 17.0 4.83258426966 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159140187807 0.243740707755 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048183405473 0.0831039109588 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395563215856 0.0758088955206 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104959884799 0.150359130593 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159565538353 0.0667264976115 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 100.480337079 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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