Films can tell us a lot about the country where they were made. What have you learned about a country from watching its movies? Use specific examples and detailsto support your response.
As I am a cinema lover, talking about it and explaining my idea, is very intresting for me. The questions surrounding whether a movies tell us about the country they were made or not, is a controversial issue among all the film and cinema lovers. In my opinion, if we choose the films of those directors who are looking to cinema not only as an industry,as an art, the answer of above question would be positive. In the following I will explore my reasons in detail.
First and foremost, we should find a good film. a good film is a film which is not only for money. According to my experience, usually independent directors in different parts of the world, try to creat some thing which is worthy to watch. this fact is not necessarily true, but those directors try to explain their ideas in their own way which makes it unique. In this procedure, they should notice cultural things and rituals of the country. For instance, a few days ago, I was watching an indian movie which was made by a famous indian director. In that movie, you could see some narrow points of indian society about marriage and it was somehow suprising for me!
Secondly, each movie is based on a senario. The senario is the result of the thoughts of a writer who is under influence of environmental objects like culture and rituals and we can not forgo the importance of the effects of these thingson his or her mind .For example when I watch Bertolini's movies, who is an italian movie director, I see that he is paying attention to the customs of that part of the Italy which he was born in.
All in all, the important thing is that we try to find good movies. if we have sufficient maturity to find them, then becuse of explained reasons and many others, they tell us a lot about the country which they were made.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, talking about, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 329.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48328267477 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49427611296 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553191489362 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.3961837819 48.9658058833 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.357142857 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212529971397 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725721205304 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0928981373304 0.0737576698707 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134349345308 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600699443392 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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