Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to develop your essay.
The topic of the passage is a very controversial issue. For better response, I have to know more about the details. In som courses like history , most of the people think self study is better than learning from a teacher. But the response will change when we talk about physics or mathematics. overall I prefer to study alone and just ask the questions from the teacher. In the following essay, I will give some reasons.
To begin with, concentration is a very important part of my learning. I think when I have a self study, I can focus on the lessons better than when I am paying attention to the lecturer, however most of the people have different experiences.
Secondly, when you are studying by yourself, you have enough time to think deeply or find the connection between the current passage and the past ones.Of course many of the people think that a teacher is more successful in connecting information and learning from a teacher, makes this process easier.
Finally, one the most important reason is that the author of a book, particularly an academic book, is a very good teacher. he or she uses the simplest methods for writing, because the readers of the books are from different nations and different levels of knowledge.
In conclusion, self studying provides a better condition than learning from a teacher and if some one face with a problem, he or she could refer to a teacher for clarifying the way and troubleshooting.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, second, secondly, so, i think, in conclusion, of course, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1202.0 1977.66487455 61% => OK
No of words: 250.0 407.700716846 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.808 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77360663462 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 212.727598566 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 618.680645161 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.2189475753 48.9658058833 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.166666667 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342406831438 0.236089414692 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107596252621 0.076458572812 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0884306496677 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181322533432 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624091223226 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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