Films can tell us a lot about the country where they were made. What have you learned about a country from watching its movies? Use specific examples and details to support your response.
By and large, over past the few decades some have called into question whether we could take in a lot by means of watching movies carte to name or not. There has been no shortages of debates among scholars that movies or soap operas have been took a toll on human’ s well-being and destiny. As far as this writer’s opinion, I subscribe to the letter idea. In what folles, I will delve into the most excellent reasons to substantiate my viewpoint.
To begin with, it goes without saying that why we could learning anythings as much as possible via different films which producing in cross the globe. First thing now looping up in my head is that are being learned about cultural values and monumental backgrounds that bring about folks, in particular, foreigners acquire deeper insight into that civilization. Let clarified with a persona experience, I fail to remember vividly but if my mind serves me right it was meany years ago when l used to head to high-school and one of those days as far as I had had threats for adventure and offers had got itchy feet, I made up my mind tp watch game of froze moves, which was one of the box office hit movies that time. To cut a long soy short, not only was it fan so as to hang on a great deal of my time for, but also I learned a plethora things in terms of America cultures and their ancient reigns. What I am trying to say is that now as far as times went by, I have figured out what happened to The US to reasons this level of power.
Other thing could be worth mentioning is that as far as I am scientist girl, provided for me a lot golden opportunity to seat in front of my laptop for severals times in succession so as to just with educational as well as sci-fiction moves that most of them are being produced by holly-wood borden my horizon. Simply put, we can learn a lot from moves. For instance, a couple of yeas ago sceneries had a research on mars to understand whether living in the mars is out of the question or not. This, in turn, caused to Russia makes a movie form the real story,, however those investigations were not successful. In fact, had not I turned my attention to that film, I would not gain a well-rounded knowledges and space and so forth,. while I was stick to my nation’ moves, I would not learn any things in such aspects.
To sum up, considering the point above mentioned, the most rational conclusion to be drawn is that; I have deeply-held belief that the movie, the prices. Thus, based upon our intermitting and aims we ought to exercise our right for the sake of watching moves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, thus, well, while, as to, for instance, in fact, in particular, such as, as well as, by and large, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2108.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 478.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.410041841 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59028259234 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 274.0 212.727598566 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573221757322 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 648.9 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.4215084159 48.9658058833 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1176470588 20.6045352989 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.29411764706 5.45110844103 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137108438461 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442252629736 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383365624199 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0754076844199 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302102016323 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.1575268817 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.