A foreign visitor has only one day to spend in your country . Where should this visitor go on that day ? Why ?
A foreign visitor has only one day to spend in France. I made the hypothesis that he was arriving at 6 am in Paris Charles de Gaulle and that his departure back to his home country was at 1 am. It is still very short but I can still figure out a great planning. He will only have to be a good walker.
I will concentrate myself on one part of France because it is not the point to be exhausted the whole day and travel by car or train for 800 kilometres. My idea was to visit the most well-known part of Paris and then see The Manche. I will now explain why I did make those choices.
Firstly, I recommend him to stop buy a bar and eat a coffee and our famous croissant. Afterwards, he will be ready to go on his trip. Furthermore, in my opinion, it is not possible to visit Paris in one day. So, I think our foreign visitor should visit the most famous part, which is the neighbourhood of the Champs Elysées. By following the avenue, he will join the arc de triumph and then the Trocadero and will discern the Tour Eiffel. Moreover, the distance until the Jardin du Luxembourg and le Louvres is not an insurmountable obstacle. Sadly, I do not plan to let the visitor goes inside the Louvres, otherwise we would need one entire week to make the tour. It mays seem a long journey but every monument I spoke about is very close to each other. I think he will need 4 hours to do the round.
On the second part of the trip, I would recommend him to go in Normandy. During lunch time, our traveller could rent a car and go to the Landing beaches. It is a famous place for UK’s and US’ travellers but except them, not many people go there; whereas the wars are a big part of our History and Culture. He will maybe need 2 hours by car, nevertheless it is not a long and boring ride because the landscape is nice. And I do not say that because I love my State! Once there, our visitor would go visit bunkers, which represent a part of France too.
Finally, after the museum and bunkers, he could eat Molds with French fries in one of the many front sea restaurants and admire the sunset. I would say that we find in Normandy one of the most beautiful place to be to see it. After this, our visitor could go back to the airport and would have seen the city and the sea!
In conclusion, the foreign visitor will see during the morning more the beautiful Haussmann’s architecture and in the afternoon the coast. It will certainly be a long day but if someone goes only one day in France, he knows that he will need to walk quite much. At least, here, the foreign visitor walks in the morning and then, he relaxes by the sea.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, still, then, well, whereas, as to, at least, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 25.0 9.8082437276 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2142.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 505.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.24158415842 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74048574033 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42274617926 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481188118812 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 663.3 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 25.0 9.59856630824 260% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.064570695 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3846153846 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4230769231 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255651807569 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725668114226 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111118081257 0.0737576698707 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134933575169 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542092093673 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 58.1214874552 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.31 10.9000537634 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.64 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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