The expression “never, never give up” means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Use specific reasons and example to support your answers
The expression “never, never give up” means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. Nowadays, a lot of people tends to preach it and they are 100% right to do it. Here are some points why I truly believe in this way of life:
First, let’s see what this expression would mean at your work. If you have an idea and/or want to grow up in the hierarchy, you should definitely never give up. Imagine if Oprah Winfrey had let her dreams down. Back in the time, Ms Winfrey was discriminated because of her gender and colour, and now she is one of the journalist the most paid and influenced in the world, all of this because she never forgot her objective. Every obstacle made her stronger.
On a second hand, I have noted that this expression is not only true only for work issues. Every human being should follow their goals. Because people in the past didn’t give up, we now live in a better world. And more is to come thanks to this kind of people. For instance, now we can know be called different from male or female. And that was a long way. Of course, it is still not very well seen, but at least, it starts to be integrated in people mind. And this is thanks to every people who had suffered from gender difficulty and never stop working for their objective: acceptance. People who never give up can resolve society issues! Other example with a minor impact can be myself. More than five people have once said to me that I wasn’t enough intelligent to get in a famous engineer school, and here I am! After, I learned it was only jealousy. And I am glad I never give up studying for what I wanted. Hypocrisy should not let you stop trying. If I had abandoned every thing I once tried because I felt dangerous or ashamed or not enough clever, I would not do much in my life. I would not drive, I would not speak foreign languages, and many more.
To conclude, I’d say that this expression is a motto everyone should advocate. You cannot live your live at the fullest if you give up every time an obstacle comes behind you. Life would be boring.
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... famous engineer school, and here I am! After, I learned it was only jealousy. And I ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, still, well, at least, for instance, kind of, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 387.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42635658915 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35816394184 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537467700258 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.2248817639 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.375 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.125 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45833333333 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387270863718 0.236089414692 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983732420453 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142328071792 0.0737576698707 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274797991052 0.150856017488 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126230519273 0.0645574589148 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 11.7677419355 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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