Life is a gift from our creator to all the creatures. Thus people instinctively have been attempting to make the life as much longer and pleasant as feasible. Living longer is a great phenomenon which has been provided by many attempts and factors like fostering the technology, knowledge, medical instrument, etc. I believe the combination of various elements has opened the windows of longstanding life.
First of all, admittedly the excessive trend of technology development should be honored since it eases the complication of life in many aspects. For instance, the transportation can completely illustrate why people are living longer. For many centuries traversing was challenging and inexorable. Many people, had died because of the catastrophic situation of the roads or the old-fashioned styles of the ships. They had to spend many months on the roads or the ocean, and dying in the middle of the journey wasn't surprising. But, after the development of the airplane and the automobile everything has changed. Traveling is not a big deal anymore and has turned into a recreational activity which has a hot market for itself.
Second, the revolution of the medicine has a huge impact on making people live longer versus the past. For example, before exploring the Antibiotic, many people had died just because of simple flu, Mump, Measles, Tuberculosis. But, forthwith Alexander Fleming changed the medical world forever by finding the Penicillin from a Fungi which name was Mycelium. I believe the invention of the AntiBiotic was a significant step toward living longer since from that day dozens of the disease can be cured just by a simple medication.
Third, the Internet is another exceptional facility which helps us to plunge into infinite life. It is a real revolution in the science and technology. Whatever question that you have about your life is going to be answered just by one click. This informative tool has rescued many people from doing the detrimental and inappropriate activities and encourage them to have a healthier lifestyle like limitless excellent information about healthful digestion and nutrition or how to get rid of stressful circumstances and thoughts. The convenience and extra time which is provided by the internet help us to take our chance to perceive about what we need to grow profoundly.
All in all, I am of the conviction that the flowering the technology in many realms like medicine, transportation, and communication is the cause of this eminent phenomenon. Finally, I can suggest everyone take advantages of this growth as much as possible.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, third, thus, for example, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2192.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 420.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21904761905 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03536972835 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557142857143 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 693.9 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5986578397 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6363636364 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0909090909 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86363636364 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14315176783 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0383792499631 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439600387243 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0797061980777 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022663298881 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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