Getting a secure job or more satisfying one?
Recently, there has been a growing body of opinion in favor of how getting a decent job can fully affect one's future in terms of providing a promising future. This is the topic, which caused a heated debate across the world not only by scholars, but also by general public across the world. Some says that getting a secure job, which can better warranty one's future can assist in providing a more convenient and comfortable life. Others have negative attitude. They subscribe to this view that getting a more satisfying job would result in more pleasure, which can better help individuals move forward in their own lives. However, as far as I am concerned I have confidence in this area that both aspects of the argument, including positive or negative ones, deserve to be assessed under sufficient thinking time and deliberation to reach the best result. To evaluate that, no less than three conspicuous detailed reasons and concrete examples have been put forward below to uphold the explanation.
At the beginning, the most influential aspect of the topic involves in guarantying one's future life. To put it simply, getting a secure job, which can assure one of the future can result in less stressful life. Knowing that the job is safe would lead to more comfortable lives through providing a better family environment, which can be of great importance for children as well as parents' tranquility. Based on reports published in a social magazine called Hamshahri in my country, the more people make sure of their jobs' future, the more comfortable life they can have.
Another spectacular facet of the argument, which seems to be important enough to be taken into consideration falls back on saving money. In other words, making sure of the job people already have can result in better saving since they are certain of the salary rate and are no longer worry about the income. Plus, it would bring them far benefit in terms of going on vacation with families or providing a more facilitated life for children. Needless to say, the more they make sure of the future of their job, the more they can save. Taking my friend as an example could be great. I had a friend names Shahab in University, which was from a wealthy family. His father was a dentist. In a word, everything was provided for him to study better because of his father's secure job.
Unlike the two abovementioned reasons, the third one concentrates on getting a satisfying career. No doubt, having a secure job would benefit families in many ways but getting a job, which satisfy one's demands is of great significance since it can provide a more meaningful life for him/her. Therefore, this aspect of the argument requires to be given more and more thought.
In the long run. Although some drawbacks are associated with not getting a secure job such as not being assured of the career's future, when all factors are contemplated the idea of getting a satisfying job carry the more weight than its cons. Therefore, from what have been discussed above, the conclusion, which may be intertwined at the beginning of the discussion and thus become more persuasive may safely accentuate that the idea of not getting a secure job is not fail as a sagacious statement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, third, thus, well, no doubt, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2687.0 1977.66487455 136% => OK
No of words: 554.0 407.700716846 136% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85018050542 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85151570047 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63501369803 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 280.0 212.727598566 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505415162455 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 867.6 618.680645161 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.1980506028 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.48 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.16 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.32 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.439498489993 0.236089414692 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123755461537 0.076458572812 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126898745631 0.0737576698707 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.311108562481 0.150856017488 206% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119546271542 0.0645574589148 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 86.8835125448 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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