the goverments spend milion of dollars in space programs. Some people think that is better to spend this money in problems closer to our home.
In my opinion, I totally disagree that governments spend millions of dollars each year on their space programmes, is better to spent on dealing with problem closer to home. Earth is becoming more worse than before and human's action are not doing nothing to protect the home when we live. Additionally, why we need to focus in other plant and not pay attention to our planet. Scientists can conttribute to have special metod for better situation in the air pollution, global warming, and healthy problems. In this way, a lot of the many invest on space program will contribute solve the problems of our home.
firstly, living in earth planet with hight air pollution is getting worse day by day.The future generation risk to have seriously problem with health and the number of dead person will increase immendiatly. The milion spend in research that did not have interes for whole of people,will contribute for continuos of life in our planet. For example, in my country operate a lot of bussniess in sectore of manifacturing are using the old machines and technology. This sectore maintain a lot of people at work, but my country has hight air pollution because of those company. If the goverment will invest to prevent the air pollution by changing this machines, we will have better life.
in conclusion, nowdays in country like affrica dieds myriad of people because of the low income for living and they are homeless and with healthy problems. The governments can supply better life for this people instead of spending a lot of many in case that are not benefical for whole people.why not increasing the quality of life and scientists will develop metod and project for new better life here in our presiouse plant
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 192, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'worse' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: worse
...oblem closer to home. Earth is becoming more worse than before and humans action are not d...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Firstly
...bute solve the problems of our home. firstly, living in earth planet with hight air ...
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Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...r pollution is getting worse day by day.The future generation risk to have seriousl...
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Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , will
...did not have interes for whole of people,will contribute for continuos of life in our...
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Line 3, column 558, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this company' or 'those companies'?
Suggestion: this company; those companies
...ntry has hight air pollution because of those company. If the goverment will invest to preven...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
... machines, we will have better life. in conclusion, nowdays in country like aff...
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Line 5, column 200, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... governments can supply better life for this people instead of spending a lot of man...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 293.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88737201365 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59512722609 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532423208191 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5957967529 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.333333333 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4166666667 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23800021316 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854915125945 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772565135238 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168101017056 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063247661932 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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