Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
The educational system has an important role in the future of every country. Young people have different preferences to develop their careers and based on this they will select the field of study. In my opinion, all university need to pay attention to the courses and to Approach studies in the interest of the field of study, so not all students have to take history courses.
First, all the pupil has mandatory history courses during high school. Already they have good knowledge in History courses and if someone feels good with those courses probably will go for history fields in the university. To instance, my own experience is a compelling example of this. when I was in high school I hated the history field and I chose maths field for my university study. Definitely, if my university has had a history course I would not Be an excellent student and my average would be lowest.
Second, University helps to be someone on life and to be an expert in the field of study. Taking the information for what you do not know. That said, History courses need to be omitted by the university because even if history contribute to the general form of education, is not necessary to take again in university.
In conclusion, there are no reasons for developing history courses in university for all students. everyone dreams to be some who and in the field that desired. If I like history, probably I will go on history fields for study. If I like math, obviously there is no need for history classes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 1977.66487455 63% => OK
No of words: 264.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70075757576 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63450986288 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 212.727598566 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492424242424 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 410.4 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3003093881 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7333333333 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73333333333 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299140645101 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107288546215 0.076458572812 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571058107967 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19392925237 0.150856017488 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277917094791 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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