Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Societies have different rules over time, they differ from each other because of the faster development of the way how do people think, live and work.
In my opinion, the rules that are presented today are not too strict for young people. I think in this way for the reasons below.
First, due to the faster development of technology, young people are exposed to different situations that make them unresponsible. They are unprotected when it comes to the navigations on the internet. therefore, how to take control of what they are doing? Of course by making them to follow and respect strict rules. That said if there are good rules, we can protect our children by making mistakes or makes them victims of bullies.
Second, Earlier societies were much more strict than modern societies. Young people were preventing by organizing different activities or expressing freely their thoughts. Nowadays are a lot of communities that young people are allowed to participate in and going all around the world. For instance, in my country, where I was a kid, young people were not allowed to go abroad. if they tried to go anywhere, they could die. Therefore, today they can go everywhere and without a doubt experiencing such a beautiful trip without any strict rules by the government.
In conclusion, rules are very essential for the good development of young people. if there are no rules, will cause a lot of problems but definitely, these rules are not strict. Rules are necessary but earlier societies were more strict than modern societies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, therefore, for instance, i think, in conclusion, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 259.0 407.700716846 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96911196911 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69491984753 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544401544402 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 618.680645161 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9479974588 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.7058823529 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2352941176 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202640861631 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658515054374 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459268822448 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116461343854 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300999478839 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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