Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
No doubt that following rules and regulations plays a significant role in people's live as individuals as well as part of societies. However, I strongly agree that expectations of the society for the young people to follow and obey those rules are too strict.
To begin, I would say that in the society in order to move forward and keep the place in peace, there should be rules and laws that young people need to follow, as well as the other people that are not in young ages.Nevertheless, some of those rules are highly strict and make youth people feel so stressful and hopeless that they can achieve their goals they have in their lives. For example, my son is in middle school, and the school's regulations and expectations are strict enough to make him not to go to school. During the lunch they have only 15 minutes to eat, and that is not enough time for everyone to finish the food. that is because some of the students are slow eater. And their rule is when the lunch teacher will say the time is up they are not allowed to take their last bite. if they do it would consider a disrespect for that lady and the student will be punished. they will keep him in detention. this is an example what they did with my son last week. He felt so frustrated and the next day did not want to go to school.
In addition, young people have the right to enjoy their own live while they are still young and in good shape. The society has to judge them less and support more. I say this, because in some countries there are still societies that will judge the young people about what they doing or where they go. For instance, in my country which is North Macedonia, if you are young and wants to have a girlfriend, they will think and say that you are a bad boy and immoral because you are still young to date someone. And this makes the live difficult because somehow their expectations are that you live your live in the way they want. that happened to me when I was eighteen and dated my husband. they were speculating all kind of thing for us, and it made us to leave the state. so, we moved in Albania for couple years and then finally moved in USA. where we found peace enough to live a normal live.
To sum up, I would say that rules and regulations are good for a society, because it keeps everyone in track, but there should be some expectations for the young people, because they can get hurt emotionally and psychologically easily.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, then, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, kind of, no doubt, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1986.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 455.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36483516484 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33408869838 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.461538461538 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 617.4 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.5834274096 48.9658058833 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5714285714 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52380952381 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222276824246 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676072586291 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0911560804363 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165336364404 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108644875201 0.0645574589148 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.62 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.