The government has announced that it plans to build a new university. Some people think that your community would be a good place to locate the university. Compare the advantages and disadvantages of establishing a new university in your community.

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The government has announced that it plans to build a new university. Some people think that your community would be a good place to locate the university. Compare the advantages and disadvantages of establishing a new university in your community.

It is obvious that there are both advantages and disadvantages for our community if the government builds a university here. In my view, I strongly believe that its advantages overweight its negative sides.
Establishing a college here will generate the large number of job opportunities. It is extremely inevitable to need many employees for such a big institution, including chefs to cook in dining hall, librarians to catalog books and gardeners to landscape the ground. This will efficiently create fairly more positions and relieve the pressure of local unemployment. For example, since my father is good at cooking and lost his job, he is applying for the positons as a chief in this university. If he will get the job, he could not only make a living and support our family, but also make a small contribution to the college.
More local high school students will choose this university as it provides them more convenience. With the college around their home, they are able to save the huge amount of time on the roads and therefore have more extra time to do other things like accompanying their family and taking part in various activities. For example, I will be certainly choose the community university, for it is extraordinary convenient for me to take care of my grandmother. In fact, my grandmother is too old to do some essential things, such as cooking and washing clothes. If I will study near my home, I would live home and help her with difficulties. Besides, I can have more time accompany my family and hence connect each other closely.
Surely, during setting up the university, noise and pollution are the uncomfortable and serious issues, which highly disturb people’ life. What’s more, the lifestyle of undergraduates who consider live off campus in apartment will cause tension among their neighbors. However, universities usually open courses to the public, and residents thus take full advantage of these free but high-quality clsses to meet their metal demands. Additionally The existence of the university boosts the nearby economy and leads to other areas’ development.
In a word ,people living in the community are greatly beneficial from the new university, like to deal with the local unemployed workforce and to give local students benefits. Comparing with its disadvantages, the positive ways make better difference

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, in fact, such as, in my view

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1991.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 385.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17142857143 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01677325918 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602597402597 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 646.2 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0468147179 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.789473684 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2631578947 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36842105263 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143415655287 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0418547846545 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512333519852 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0873281012625 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431109539642 0.0645574589148 67% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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