Governments should not fund any scientific research whose consequences are unclear.
One of the more complexes things on the life are the studies. Much are the areas and all have consequencies on the study. Therefore I agree with this topic since that some studies can cause consequence and make worse to the population.
My first reason is that, some times the researches need to hide the informations of your researche because the security. Since that when you say that are you find answare some body can do faster than you and publish the date before. However there are reserach that was made and the consequeces was saw after like in some bilogy researche. To give a ideia, in Australia have a greate problem with a species of rabbit that was introduced. A researche gove the rubbit and some ran away and intals a great problem in ecology on Australia ecosystem. This situation are always inlutration to say about the risks research.
My second reason, relate to know a results because sometimes can infer the risks the human population. There are a lot resuche that involve nuclear experiment and how all us know this is very dengerous to the population. The nuclear experiment have been made afraid on the word. Since that the dictador of Korea started did experiment with this, and how we already saw, the consequences is large. To illustrate, the second world war that had nuclear bombs in Hiroshima and Nagazaki wich have conseuence until today.
My third reason is because of the need of a surveillance to chek the research. Since that there are research that have riscks, and can cause proble to civilization , is important some that all researche pass for a committee to be proved. Since that this researche is dengereous it need be seve, and the research don’t need stop to search.
In conlusion, I belive that is important and need be know all possible consequences in studies. Autough some researches is dengerou it’s not need stop but be doig with security.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 327.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84097859327 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6679860455 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504587155963 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.8453387726 48.9658058833 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.3157894737 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2105263158 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.78947368421 5.45110844103 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108685027076 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380291779961 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346644838809 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0684857038975 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309057278521 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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