Health and wellness is a growing concern for a number of people across the globe. Some people believe a well-balanced diet and exercise routine is the best way to stay healthy. Others suggest that good health has less to do with what you eat, and more to do with how you live. In other words, maintaining positive relationships with friends and family is a better way to remain healthy.
It is known that physical and mental health are related with each other and impact our bodies in a holistic manner. A wide range of factors may influence our health or welfare, including eating and social habits. I agree with the statement that the way we face life is more relevant for our health than a balanced diet. I feel this way for the following reasons.
Firstly, good relationship with family and friends is important to maintain people connected and avoid loneliness. When we have a group of beloved ones, we can share problems, believes and thoughts. This communication and close relation make a difference in people’s life. It is crucial for humans to fell being part of a group. It could enhance our happiness and diminish sadness, therefore, maintaining good mental health.
Secondly, if we choose to live facing life in a positive attitude it will impair our stress levels. Stress is one of the major health problems in the modern society due to our daily lives, on the other hand, it could be avoided or reduced with simple attitudes toward how we live. If we find the way to avoid stress in life we could increase our wellness and welfare.
Finally, besides increase happiness and decrease stress, positive relationships could diminish the likelihood of other health problems, for example, myocardial infarction, depression and other physical and mental illness. Since most of these diseases are negative consequences of our life style.
To sum up, I strongly believe that the way we face life and relate with friends and family has a huge impact in our health. This is because staying connected with people we love and facing life with less stress may avoid nefarious illness such as mental depression and myocardial infarction.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... and other physical and mental illness. Since most of these diseases are negative con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, i feel, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 293.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0204778157 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63314948681 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546075085324 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2284133593 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9375 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3125 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 5.45110844103 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200462086025 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073445135267 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469894192004 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123200729942 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501907976796 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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