highly communicative partners
Friends have an influential and tremendous impact on our lives. In fact, it is vitally important to create a strong bond for our large social network to establish a concrete basis of the communication skills which, in turn, have a great role to guide our nation toward progress. In addition, highly socialized people have a favorable impact on people's personalities. Therefore, I personally believe that the best partners are the highly communicative due to its benefits in both terms of enhancing the interpersonal skills and improve the mental health. The following explanation goes as follows.
First, it is critical to instill the concrete basis of the social skills from an early age because it is the guiding light that can help people to achieve success and fulfill their goals. Indeed, by interacting and communicating with highly communicative individuals, this will help to improve these skills and reflect positively on their future workflow. For instance, a person who has the ability to communicate easily with people surrounding him, they will teach them how to cooperate efficiently and collaborate effectively. Thus, such a collaborative environment enhance their social skills immensely which a favorable impact on their future work productivity and assist them to finish their tasks in a more orderly and a timely fashion manner. In contrast, those who do not used to have like these partners, they will suffer a lot and will be vulnerable to a lot of obstacles because they lack such a large net of collaboration and this reflects negatively on their future work outcome. In conclusion, being involved with communicative people will aid us to build up a profound base of the communication skills.
Second, people always need friends in their lives to help them improve their personal health. In fact, having people in our life that have the aptitude to socialize and contact effectively will enhance our mode dramatically. For example, I used to engage in a conversation with my special friend who is an outgoing and adaptable person, I express myself easily and share my thought and feelings, that what assist me to get rid of the stress and built up the tension of our stressful life. In addition, he revitalizes me as the battery that is being recharged because he has the capacity to deal and adapt effectively to all the situation. Consequently, highly communicative persons have the ability to the psychological health.
To sum up, I wholehearted believe that people should have socialized friends because they have an indelible role in establishing the solid base of the communication abilities and refine the mental health. Hopefully, parents will eagerly seek to advocate their offspring to choose such as these partners to carve out many advantages that will help them in their upcoming future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 28, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, second, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2374.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 459.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17211328976 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98770904268 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505446623094 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 754.2 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.3956255731 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.888888889 100.406767564 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 5.45110844103 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198962706774 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751867964489 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100636519184 0.0737576698707 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131002695838 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589438146561 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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